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Fool in a Pool

A fool in a pool

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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the Write a Humorous 5-7-5 writing prompt. i enjoyed this slightly dark yet humorous poem. It brought a smile to my face. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
    A smile was my intention!
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, Fool in a Pool, has the proper formatting and sees that the teaser was a wheezer and lunged into a sponge-pulling sinking situation. ....

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
    Hahahaha!