Teeth
a 5-7-518 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
Bill,
Congrats on winning the Humorous 5-7-5 contest. This is absolutely hilarious and a deserving winner of the contest. It is a stark warning to surely brush and floss every day or wind up like Gary with your teeth in a glass one day.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Bill,
Congrats on winning the Humorous 5-7-5 contest. This is absolutely hilarious and a deserving winner of the contest. It is a stark warning to surely brush and floss every day or wind up like Gary with your teeth in a glass one day.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Eugene
Comment from jessizero
I can see why your poem won the humorous 5-7-5 contest! This was defintely funny, and you got the syllable count right. You made me laugh! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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I can see why your poem won the humorous 5-7-5 contest! This was defintely funny, and you got the syllable count right. You made me laugh! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Jessizero
Comment from Dick Waters
Very nicely done, Bill.
I've been busy on other projects and haven't been on the site as frequently. That means I haven't read many posts, sorry.
Best regards,
Dick
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Very nicely done, Bill.
I've been busy on other projects and haven't been on the site as frequently. That means I haven't read many posts, sorry.
Best regards,
Dick
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Dick
Comment from jaded831
Getting older I can truly relate. Luckily I still have all my teeth, but my friends and family either have partial's or no teeth at all. So your 5-7-5 gave me a laugh, which was the point.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Getting older I can truly relate. Luckily I still have all my teeth, but my friends and family either have partial's or no teeth at all. So your 5-7-5 gave me a laugh, which was the point.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Teeth in a cup, always a cool sight gag.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Ewwww. So bad...and yet, here I am smirking over it. I'm obviously not going straight to Heaven, I'm thinking, irreverent soul that I am. (And I'll be seeing YOU there, obviously!!)
Funny poem...and I can't believe you found that picture to accentuate it!! HAHAHAH.
Good luck in the contest, Mystery Writer. xo
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Ewwww. So bad...and yet, here I am smirking over it. I'm obviously not going straight to Heaven, I'm thinking, irreverent soul that I am. (And I'll be seeing YOU there, obviously!!)
Funny poem...and I can't believe you found that picture to accentuate it!! HAHAHAH.
Good luck in the contest, Mystery Writer. xo
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Rachelle. I wanted to give folks a smile.
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Well, count me in!!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Haha! Quite a grin indeed! I think he might have lost more than just 'some' of his teeth:) Lovely image and your 5-7-5 is correctly fulfilling the format. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Haha! Quite a grin indeed! I think he might have lost more than just 'some' of his teeth:) Lovely image and your 5-7-5 is correctly fulfilling the format. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Debbie
Comment from GWHARGIS
Now this was funny. I know there was a lesson in this but the delivery was priceless. You even picked the perfect picture to accompany it. Good luck in the contest with this. Gretchen
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Now this was funny. I know there was a lesson in this but the delivery was priceless. You even picked the perfect picture to accompany it. Good luck in the contest with this. Gretchen
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Gretchen.
Comment from Colorado Owl
This is well worth six stars! I have reached an age that requires me to take meticulous care of my teeth, to avoid this Gary's fate. Your poem made me laugh, with the picture smiling back at me :-)
Well done!
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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This is well worth six stars! I have reached an age that requires me to take meticulous care of my teeth, to avoid this Gary's fate. Your poem made me laugh, with the picture smiling back at me :-)
Well done!
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Thank you, CO, for the cool six.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is true of many people with dentures. It is sad that everyone doesn't at least try to take care of their teeth.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Hi
This is true of many people with dentures. It is sad that everyone doesn't at least try to take care of their teeth.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Joan
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No problem.
Joan
Comment from Shanbreen
This is cute, and, yes, quite humorous.
Keeps "grin in a glass". Gary is indeed lucky to be able to grin after losing his teeth. Well done. All the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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This is cute, and, yes, quite humorous.
Keeps "grin in a glass". Gary is indeed lucky to be able to grin after losing his teeth. Well done. All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Shanbreen
