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World Go Play In The Mud Day

contest entry

2 total reviews 
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the Write a Humorous 5-7-5 writing prompt. My town has a mud football day every Summer but keeping clean isn't an objective lol. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
    Thank you, Wow - mud football has got to be fun to watch.
Comment from Pamusart
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Hi

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

I like it!! The line threw me the line is a true satori line

I like the way you built it up and then said don't get dirty after telling them to jump into the mud. That's hilarious

I really enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
    Thank you - I'm glad you like it