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A memorial to my victims.

Having to dig a mass grave in my backyard

23 total reviews 
Comment from joann r romei
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This was great, and it reminds me of Carrie when her hand popped out of the grave, I heard a story once where a man killed a bird and the next day when he went outside a group of birds swarmed around him, be careful lol.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you Joann for your kind words.
    Sorry I am late responding.
    Best wishes
    Mary
Comment from Steve Foreman
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Oh, you have to be so careful with Starlings (remember Hitchcock?)!
A well written piece and very good to read; and I hope your guilt is real! A good job, well done.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
    Thank you Steve. I am delighted with your review and appreciative of the six stars.
    Thank you.
    Mary
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Oh my goodness Mary, the birds are watching you! You did your best to honour their deaths, but birds have long memories and see everything. I don't think starlings are much of a threat, but your story reminds me of the Hitchcock movie! A fine and informative post with a chilling tale to tell, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
    Than you Dolly, I appreciate your kind words topped off with six stars!
    I am honored.

    Best wishes
    Mary
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 05-Jul-2024
    You are most welcome Mary, a fine write x
Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Mary,
I've never heard of birds drowning before. I've had a lot of bugs drown in standing water, but never a bird. Where I used to live we had multitudes of crows and ravens, no starlings. Whenever a crow died, by whatever means, all the other crows for a long way off gather and start squawking. It can be almost deafening.
I think of you and your husband often and say a prayer. I hope things are getting better, though I know it's still a struggle.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
    Tom, I always look forward to your kind words and prayers. I have to tell you they are a comfort.

    Blessings always.
    Mary
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Hi Mary,
A cure story about your misadventure with your rain barrels, though that was not their original intention. The bids stopped for a drink, but couldn't get back out. You did your level best to bury the unfortunates and call it all even. The live birds have stuck around to make you feel guilty.

Great job,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
    Thank you Rhonda, I appreciate your review and kind words.
    Mary
Comment from Bill Schott
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This is a funny tale, within the sadness of death. I have killed chipmunks by seeding water in a tall pail, but I did it deliberately. My varmint killing has been widely disdained.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
    Thank you Bill for the review. You also replaced the thought of dead Starlings with cute little chipmunks struggling in the water.
    Mary
Comment from Thesis
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An interesting take on the intentions of Starlings. You describe a large amount of deaths, but most birds do not just drown in water without something aiding their death. While you present a good scenario as to why they would be angry at the deaths of their friends, I don't think they have a revenge reflex.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
    Thank you for your review and comments. It was taken in humor.
    Mary
Comment from GoWiSt
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"Having to dig a mass grave in my backyard
A memorial to my victims." Why, how so noble of you.
"Remember my mowing story where I stripped the lawn of grass?" Ohh, that story!...Sorry, never read it.
"To wash them out," What is 'them'? Dishes? Clothes? Furniture?
"two birds had their wings sticking straight in the air" So they weren't completely dead when you buried them?
Next episode: The Strike of the Starlings!

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
    Thank you for your comments. I went to wash out both items. they were dead alright.
    Regards.
    mary
Comment from Wendy G
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Poor birds. Very strange that they would go right in, and sad they couldn't get out again. But in the circumstances you did your best to treat them with respect. I hope the others don't hold a grudge.
Wendy

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
    Thank you Wendy. I appreciate your review.
    Take care
    Mary
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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One would still expect the starlings to have been a bit smarter, especially after seeing what had happened to their brothers and sisters. But well done for giving them such a decent burial even if some did try to escape or make a rude gesture before ascending to heaven. I enjoyed reading your humorous story and wish you luck from now because their mates are definitely watching you:)) Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
    Thank you Debbie, I appreciate your review. I enjoyed your words.
    Best wishes,
    Mary