Comment from karenina

Excellent

Congratulations on second place. I loved the double meaning of that final line. (And if you didn't intend it, I guess that says something about my sense of humor!)

This WAS fun and DID make me laugh...

Karenina

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024

Thank you, Karenina, for your very nice review along with your comments. Yes, I did intend that meaning. I originally had a picture of Pinocchio, but it wasn't allowed.
Thanks again,
Dick

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

An excellent entry for the Write a Humorous 5-7-5 writing prompt. This one gave me a laugh. I mean...they did say no swimsuits allowed! I feel certain a lawyer could argue for you in court. lol Nicely done.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024

Thank you, Marilyn, for your very nice review and the comments. I'm with you on what a lawyer could present in court. Originally, I had a picture of Pinocchio, and thought it was a good attention getter, but it wasn't allowed.
Be safe, and thanks again.
Dick

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I loved the use of "outstanding entry." You also got the syllable count right and the topic was humorous. I got a kick out of this one. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024

Once again you honor me with your review!
I appreciate your continued support, and I'm glad you said I got the syllable count right. I was just sitting in the other room and wondered that concern. I tried to use a Pinocchio cartoon, but the site said it was protected. So, put that in your head to go along with the entry.
Best regards,
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