Winning
Struggling to win against the demons in my head and nearby2 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
As long as we have a strong Will and still have fight left in us, we can overcome any obstacle in life. We only become losers when we give up. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May God bless you. Patricia.
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As long as we have a strong Will and still have fight left in us, we can overcome any obstacle in life. We only become losers when we give up. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Nicole
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Is it OK if the last line has six syllables? I thought it was supposed to be 2-2-5-7-5
I like the idea of fighting on and not giving up no matter what the situation is. But, there are some situations that you can't remedy. Things like politicians, wealthy, businessman, all conspiring to make us the common man.
You can't win against that
I wonder what kind of demons you're talking about. Sounds like the demons in your own head. (Your here is for the narrator only)
Enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi, Nicole
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Is it OK if the last line has six syllables? I thought it was supposed to be 2-2-5-7-5
I like the idea of fighting on and not giving up no matter what the situation is. But, there are some situations that you can't remedy. Things like politicians, wealthy, businessman, all conspiring to make us the common man.
You can't win against that
I wonder what kind of demons you're talking about. Sounds like the demons in your own head. (Your here is for the narrator only)
Enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024