Pillsbury Doughboy
Small blonde boy!2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is charming and playful, perfectly capturing the innocence and delight of a small child dressed up. I love that you did it with only 17 syllables! Picturing this brought a smile to my face.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Your poem is charming and playful, perfectly capturing the innocence and delight of a small child dressed up. I love that you did it with only 17 syllables! Picturing this brought a smile to my face.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind review!
Comment from jessizero
I keep counting six syllables on that first line instead of five. I could be wrong, but you might want to double-check it. Your content was cute. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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I keep counting six syllables on that first line instead of five. I could be wrong, but you might want to double-check it. Your content was cute. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Thank you! I changed it to, "small blonde boy."
