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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this rhyming contest entry with us. I enjoyed the message of this entry, but I fail to see any rhyming scheme. Maybe it's just me. Good luck with the contest.
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Thank you for sharing this rhyming contest entry with us. I enjoyed the message of this entry, but I fail to see any rhyming scheme. Maybe it's just me. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
Comment from nancy Laine
I like the mystery element of your poem. It was intriguing, but the rhythm seemed a little off. It rhymed at the beginning but not throughout. It did create a picture in my mind. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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I like the mystery element of your poem. It was intriguing, but the rhythm seemed a little off. It rhymed at the beginning but not throughout. It did create a picture in my mind. Nicely done.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Hi Nancy,
Every verse of my poem is rhyming,
Thanks,
Sarah
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was so wonderful. I love how you portray her as a mysterious presence that still captivates and brings joy to him. The interplay of hope and fear adds so much depth, making their relationship so complex. It's a lovely poem that I thought explored the balance of opposites.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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I thought this was so wonderful. I love how you portray her as a mysterious presence that still captivates and brings joy to him. The interplay of hope and fear adds so much depth, making their relationship so complex. It's a lovely poem that I thought explored the balance of opposites.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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thanks again for your review, i have compared here the moon and the sun to a very distant complex relationship.
Warm regards,
Sarah