Silhouettes
Watch them move...3 total reviews
Comment from AP Apgar
What an excellent poem and picture presentation supporting - I particularly like your depth of imagination - silhouette swallowing sunlight at dusk -into the black-hole of night - nice - Well done. Good Luck -
AP
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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What an excellent poem and picture presentation supporting - I particularly like your depth of imagination - silhouette swallowing sunlight at dusk -into the black-hole of night - nice - Well done. Good Luck -
AP
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thank you so very much for taking the time to review! Your words are as always greatly appreciated. Have a lovely day!
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
OMGosh, I was so sure I reviewed this. I remember saying that because of going off meds cold turkey that for a while I was so afraid of the dark. I had nightmares that satan tied me up with electric fence made of barbwire and mocked me as he tightened the fence and turned it higher. The Dr said it was so bad it could have given me a stroke or a heart attack as my blood pressure went to a dangerous level.
I only told you that to tell you that is what your poem brought out in me. That memory of despair and fear. But as the sun would start to shine it would give me some relief. The nightmares went on for about a month. This describes it very well, so as much as it didn't upset me, it was very relatable and I no longer go thru that but for a minute it was weird. Thanks for such a realistic ride and read. LOL.
Debi
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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OMGosh, I was so sure I reviewed this. I remember saying that because of going off meds cold turkey that for a while I was so afraid of the dark. I had nightmares that satan tied me up with electric fence made of barbwire and mocked me as he tightened the fence and turned it higher. The Dr said it was so bad it could have given me a stroke or a heart attack as my blood pressure went to a dangerous level.
I only told you that to tell you that is what your poem brought out in me. That memory of despair and fear. But as the sun would start to shine it would give me some relief. The nightmares went on for about a month. This describes it very well, so as much as it didn't upset me, it was very relatable and I no longer go thru that but for a minute it was weird. Thanks for such a realistic ride and read. LOL.
Debi
Comment Written 27-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review my poem! Glad you enjoyed it and it was realistic! Have a nice day!
Comment from Steve Foreman
This is a cool nonet poem, well written and emotive. I like the choice of words and phrases. I especially like "they capture sunbeams like a blackhole swallowing the light's rays".
The illustration you chose supports the poem well.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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This is a cool nonet poem, well written and emotive. I like the choice of words and phrases. I especially like "they capture sunbeams like a blackhole swallowing the light's rays".
The illustration you chose supports the poem well.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your review! Your words are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day!