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Conversation with FanStory about Kyrielle4 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Clever you! Welcome to FanStory...and please step this way directly into the Winner's Circle!
How great is that for your first post!?
Congratulations!
Karenina
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Clever you! Welcome to FanStory...and please step this way directly into the Winner's Circle!
How great is that for your first post!?
Congratulations!
Karenina
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
Comment from Dr. Nad
Welcome to FanStory. The note says this is your first milestone submission. Congratulations. This is an excellent submission and it is obvious that you are not brand new to the writing scene. If you write poetry every day as the poem indicates, you will be ahead of most of us here, but not all. Check things out and I think you'll enjoy your time here. You'll meet people that will encourage you. Every now and then you'll find someone who Might discourage you but, that's part of the growing maturing process. Best of luck. You'll find that six stars are not easy to come by but I know you have at least one. L. O. L.
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Welcome to FanStory. The note says this is your first milestone submission. Congratulations. This is an excellent submission and it is obvious that you are not brand new to the writing scene. If you write poetry every day as the poem indicates, you will be ahead of most of us here, but not all. Check things out and I think you'll enjoy your time here. You'll meet people that will encourage you. Every now and then you'll find someone who Might discourage you but, that's part of the growing maturing process. Best of luck. You'll find that six stars are not easy to come by but I know you have at least one. L. O. L.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Congratulations on your first post! It's a good one! Your playful and rhythmic poem reminds me of the creativity of Dr. Seuss. The repetition of "Every line I get to invent" shares with me the joy and freedom found in writing. The way you formatted this with eight-syllable lines gives it a steady and satisfying rhythm. Your poem is a charming read that celebrates writing and the possibilities of writing a poem. Such a perfect choice for a first post!
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Congratulations on your first post! It's a good one! Your playful and rhythmic poem reminds me of the creativity of Dr. Seuss. The repetition of "Every line I get to invent" shares with me the joy and freedom found in writing. The way you formatted this with eight-syllable lines gives it a steady and satisfying rhythm. Your poem is a charming read that celebrates writing and the possibilities of writing a poem. Such a perfect choice for a first post!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
Comment from jessizero
Congratulations on your first milestone post! I enjoyed your kyrielle. It was truly a new format for me. The line you chose to repeat was great. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Congratulations on your first milestone post! I enjoyed your kyrielle. It was truly a new format for me. The line you chose to repeat was great. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024