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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Sadness and loss seem to be the themes here with no light to help assuage the melancholy. Even the red wine has been consumed and we're left in darkness. Well done, Gypsy, on another excellent verse! Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Sadness and loss seem to be the themes here with no light to help assuage the melancholy. Even the red wine has been consumed and we're left in darkness. Well done, Gypsy, on another excellent verse! Take care Debbie
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I could feel the emotion and the longing as I read this poem and views this gorgeous presentation. Your talent is shining brightly with this one. I always think you can't get any better and you do.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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I could feel the emotion and the longing as I read this poem and views this gorgeous presentation. Your talent is shining brightly with this one. I always think you can't get any better and you do.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your five stars review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Well a love that is no longer there because the lover has gone, very real human emotions that we have related to at some point in our lives. The color scheme of pale light and dark fits the theme of your poem very well, and the imagery is well depicted.
RJ
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Well a love that is no longer there because the lover has gone, very real human emotions that we have related to at some point in our lives. The color scheme of pale light and dark fits the theme of your poem very well, and the imagery is well depicted.
RJ
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your five stars review and kind words.
Gypsy
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You're welcome
Comment from GWHARGIS
this was a very sad poem. Yeaning for someone who either doesn't return the feeling or is away and unattainable is a terrible feeling. You made me feel the loneliness and taste the wine. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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this was a very sad poem. Yeaning for someone who either doesn't return the feeling or is away and unattainable is a terrible feeling. You made me feel the loneliness and taste the wine. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen
Have a wonderful night.
Gypsy
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Gypsy
At first, I thought this was a contest entry. It was because I was reading your notes as if they were the prompts for the contest lol
I'm trying to figure out where the red wine comes in. I think they are stargazers drinking wine and then the stars left the sky. And to add insult to injury they had consumed all of the red wine too.
I really think that was clever having the stars take the guy with them. That was a clever line.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Hi, Gypsy
At first, I thought this was a contest entry. It was because I was reading your notes as if they were the prompts for the contest lol
I'm trying to figure out where the red wine comes in. I think they are stargazers drinking wine and then the stars left the sky. And to add insult to injury they had consumed all of the red wine too.
I really think that was clever having the stars take the guy with them. That was a clever line.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Pam
Have a wonderful night.
Gypsy
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I love the aching, sensual flavor of these words and the tremendous graphics you have created to accentuate them. You are masterful, and I admire your talent and expertise so very much!! xoxo
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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I love the aching, sensual flavor of these words and the tremendous graphics you have created to accentuate them. You are masterful, and I admire your talent and expertise so very much!! xoxo
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Rachelle.
Have a wonderful night.
Gypsy
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The same to you, Gypsy! xo
Comment from shelley kaye
did the stars run off with the wine again? LOL!
totally cool love poem craving for more... with smooth flow...
nice work! love the blue colours, too
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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did the stars run off with the wine again? LOL!
totally cool love poem craving for more... with smooth flow...
nice work! love the blue colours, too
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley.
Have a wonderful night.
Gypsy
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Nicely done. Good picture. Pictures are wonderfully presented. Good work. Cross your fingers for me or send up best wishes for me to get my final approval post haste. Waiting in limbo is torture. :-0 Karen
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Nicely done. Good picture. Pictures are wonderfully presented. Good work. Cross your fingers for me or send up best wishes for me to get my final approval post haste. Waiting in limbo is torture. :-0 Karen
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Karen.
Have a wonderful night.
Gypsy
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:-)