Comment from Mintybee

Excellent

This 2-10-2 poem is really good. I love the rhyming aspect. The short lines are strong and clear, and the long, middle line gives enough detail to join them.
Mintybee

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024

Thank you for the kinds comment.

I hope you took the time to hear Dan sing .. the video is below in the notes section!

reply by Mintybee on 26-Jun-2024

I did watch the video. Truly remarkable!

reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024

For me it?s one of the best versions heard yet.

Dan Vasc has many more covers of famous songs on line 😉

Keep safe!🍀

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi,

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

I listened to the video and he.'s fantastic.

Your poem looks good for the contest. I did feel like I was soaring especially when he turned on the jets

I liked your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024

I?m so glad you enjoyed his version, I was blown away.

I posted nearly 10 hours ago and it had 10 views yet you were the only one that wrote a comment.

I appreciate your kind words!

He has many other hits on line .

I wish you all the best !