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9 total reviews
Comment from Earthlover
This is stunning!
Love, Love, Love the visual art and placement of words.
I've never seen this arrangement before.
The black back round and green font style is lovely.
Very sensual in a tasteful manner.
Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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This is stunning!
Love, Love, Love the visual art and placement of words.
I've never seen this arrangement before.
The black back round and green font style is lovely.
Very sensual in a tasteful manner.
Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Earthlover, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Irene Bratton
Hi, Gypsy. Your poem is so passionate, full of romance, and it has that "ahh" effect -- as most of your work does. I'm not the biggest fan of free verse poetry, but yours is so well done that I appreciate it more. Personally, I don't think you need the content warning. I find nothing offensive about it, but I guess it all depends on how sensitive some readers might be.
I love this poem. The words are free and floating like birds on the breeze; they don't feel forced at all. The graphics, color choices... just the entire presentation is perfect. Fantastic work! All my best...
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Hi, Gypsy. Your poem is so passionate, full of romance, and it has that "ahh" effect -- as most of your work does. I'm not the biggest fan of free verse poetry, but yours is so well done that I appreciate it more. Personally, I don't think you need the content warning. I find nothing offensive about it, but I guess it all depends on how sensitive some readers might be.
I love this poem. The words are free and floating like birds on the breeze; they don't feel forced at all. The graphics, color choices... just the entire presentation is perfect. Fantastic work! All my best...
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Hello, Irene, I appreciate your exceptional six-star review and kind words. I agree with you, my poem is sensual and not offensive. Sensuality and passion are part of being human. But in the past, a couple of reviewers told me my poem needed a warning. It depends on the reader.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have a feeling he's tangled in more than her hair. Just a thought. Thank you for sharing this passionate and beautiful poem and presentation with us. It's just as wonderful as we've come to expect from your poetry.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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I have a feeling he's tangled in more than her hair. Just a thought. Thank you for sharing this passionate and beautiful poem and presentation with us. It's just as wonderful as we've come to expect from your poetry.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara, I appreciate your review.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
i don't really liked being tangled... but i liked this free verse of sensual love...
great imagistic words and smooth flow with a random touch of rhyme here and there...
cool pics, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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i don't really liked being tangled... but i liked this free verse of sensual love...
great imagistic words and smooth flow with a random touch of rhyme here and there...
cool pics, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Another of your very sensual, beautifully presented verses, this time symbolically bonding the lovers together in this entanglement of hair. Your lovely, free verse is pleasingly fluent adding still more cohesion with some rhyming of the last lines of each stanza. Thank you, Gypsy, for sharing this excellent verse. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Another of your very sensual, beautifully presented verses, this time symbolically bonding the lovers together in this entanglement of hair. Your lovely, free verse is pleasingly fluent adding still more cohesion with some rhyming of the last lines of each stanza. Thank you, Gypsy, for sharing this excellent verse. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Debbie
Gypsy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a close intimate connection between lovers and I felt the desire and passion in this post, a fine read, well chosen words in this fine presentation, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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This is a close intimate connection between lovers and I felt the desire and passion in this post, a fine read, well chosen words in this fine presentation, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
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You are most welcome x x x
Comment from royowen
This reads like songs of songs, it burns like, As the deer pants for the water so my soul longs after you, it is that eternal yearning for satisfaction and fulfilment, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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This reads like songs of songs, it burns like, As the deer pants for the water so my soul longs after you, it is that eternal yearning for satisfaction and fulfilment, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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I love the Songs of Songs.
Thank you very much Roy
Gypsy
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Well done
Comment from GWHARGIS
I'm just going to throw this out there, but have you ever considered writing a romance. This was a short poem and I'm sitting here sweating after this. You definitely have a way with words. Beautifully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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I'm just going to throw this out there, but have you ever considered writing a romance. This was a short poem and I'm sitting here sweating after this. You definitely have a way with words. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Gretchen, I appreciate your encouragement. Maybe I can start small and work my way up. I am not a good writer but there is room for improvement.
Thank you for reading my poem and for the kind feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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I've read some of your prose. You are a very good writer. It just takes a while to find your voice. That's why I write in first person. It's easier to get lost in the character. No pressure but I think you'd kill it. Gretchen
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I have been told to over use "I" when I use first person.... it's hard.
Comment from jessizero
I loved your repetition of "I'm tangled in your long hair." This poem was beautiful and romantic. Your formatting was lovely, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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I loved your repetition of "I'm tangled in your long hair." This poem was beautiful and romantic. Your formatting was lovely, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Thank you for reading my poem and for the kind feedback.
Gypsy hugs