Be Careful
A wish gone wrong.8 total reviews
Comment from zanya
A cautionary tale and so well told - the pacing is excellent. No need to hype up the action. The deeds speak for themselves. Truth unveils quietly but unflinchingly;
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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A cautionary tale and so well told - the pacing is excellent. No need to hype up the action. The deeds speak for themselves. Truth unveils quietly but unflinchingly;
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Thank You for this amazing review Zanya.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Excellent! A very strong message at the end of a well expressed and constructed story about a wish to return to what was perceived as the glorious past, only to find that the reality, as so often happens in dreams, is never what it seems. Well done and good luck! Debbie
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Excellent! A very strong message at the end of a well expressed and constructed story about a wish to return to what was perceived as the glorious past, only to find that the reality, as so often happens in dreams, is never what it seems. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Author,
This is truly a tragic less, one from which we all can learn. The protagonist naively wished for the past, and found himself in a world of horror.
Your description of "hell" is an excellent one-/what a horrible way to spend eternity.
Good luck with this very well-written story.
Cindy
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Author,
This is truly a tragic less, one from which we all can learn. The protagonist naively wished for the past, and found himself in a world of horror.
Your description of "hell" is an excellent one-/what a horrible way to spend eternity.
Good luck with this very well-written story.
Cindy
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nicely written story for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful week and may God bless you with his riches. Patricia
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This is a very nicely written story for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful week and may God bless you with his riches. Patricia
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
Comment from Steve Foreman
Great, great, great!
Awesome writing, a great story, very descriptive and scene-setting, ending in a very philosophical statement. I enjoyed reading it. Be careful what you wish for, indeed!
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Great, great, great!
Awesome writing, a great story, very descriptive and scene-setting, ending in a very philosophical statement. I enjoyed reading it. Be careful what you wish for, indeed!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
Comment from royowen
I must admit, I'm aware that history is written by the victors, not by the oppressed, it would read decidedly different if it was written by the vanquished, it would expose the fallacy of man's glory to his shame, a super write my friend, blessings Roy
Typo : Antietam('s) grin widened.
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I must admit, I'm aware that history is written by the victors, not by the oppressed, it would read decidedly different if it was written by the vanquished, it would expose the fallacy of man's glory to his shame, a super write my friend, blessings Roy
Typo : Antietam('s) grin widened.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
Comment from artisart4u
He saw something antique and wanted it and when he opened the genie gave him his wish. This wish caused him to have a different view of the past and today was not as bad as he thought it was. So that straighten his mind up.
Good luck in the Wish Granted contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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He saw something antique and wanted it and when he opened the genie gave him his wish. This wish caused him to have a different view of the past and today was not as bad as he thought it was. So that straighten his mind up.
Good luck in the Wish Granted contest.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Wow, I didn?t think six stars was possible. The grass isn?t always greener.
Comment from Reanna Ashburn
This is one of the works I have enjoyed reading the most. In a limited amount of words, there was a substantial story told that can be seen as eye opening.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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This is one of the works I have enjoyed reading the most. In a limited amount of words, there was a substantial story told that can be seen as eye opening.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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A look into the current political climate.
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A look into the current political climate.
