Comment from
artisart4u
Yes, it has to be better than narrow. People have to see more things changing around them by their political party.
You have the right amount of syllables for each line and good luck with your poem.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
Thank you! It?s appreciated!
Comment from
papa55mike
I wish there were a few more candidates to vote for. Now it's a choice between the lesser of two evils. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024