Enough Is A Feast
1-6-1 Poem3 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Fluent and well rhymed in your 1-6-1 verse. The image is eye-catching and your poem sends out the right message that we should limit our eating to what is needed and live simply for our sake and that of the rest of the world. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Fluent and well rhymed in your 1-6-1 verse. The image is eye-catching and your poem sends out the right message that we should limit our eating to what is needed and live simply for our sake and that of the rest of the world. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Debbie :)
Comment from jessizero
I liked your 1-6-1 poem. You got the rhymes and syllable counts right, and I liked your internal rhyme. The picture helped, too. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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I liked your 1-6-1 poem. You got the rhymes and syllable counts right, and I liked your internal rhyme. The picture helped, too. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Jessi.
Comment from papa55mike
Sadly, many people have so much and refuse to share it with others who are in desperate need. What a wonderfully written poem and the picture is interesting. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Sadly, many people have so much and refuse to share it with others who are in desperate need. What a wonderfully written poem and the picture is interesting. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Mike.
