The Unwilling Heir
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Comment from karenina
I'm gobsmacked. However do you do it, Carol? Every chapter is a new revelation!
Sandra is no quitter. Of course she'll do all she can to help!
Here's hoping Patrick doesn't pay the ultimate price for leaving the mansion.
Yikes!
Karenina
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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I'm gobsmacked. However do you do it, Carol? Every chapter is a new revelation!
Sandra is no quitter. Of course she'll do all she can to help!
Here's hoping Patrick doesn't pay the ultimate price for leaving the mansion.
Yikes!
Karenina
Comment Written 27-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Yes, I am a little worried about Patrick...And old man who was once full of life is given a chance to return as a earthly figure to the big city...I hope he keeps his mind on the task at hand.
Smiles
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Oh no.... Patrick has to be okay!
One mistake will cost him all redemption!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
It sounds as if Patrick and William have made a pretty good plan. But it also sounds as if Sandra is important to that plan. Patrick is also risk eternal damnation if he doesn't get back to the mansion in time. You need to change one thing: . . . tuck their (tails) and run . . .
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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It sounds as if Patrick and William have made a pretty good plan. But it also sounds as if Sandra is important to that plan. Patrick is also risk eternal damnation if he doesn't get back to the mansion in time. You need to change one thing: . . . tuck their (tails) and run . . .
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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thanks for pointing out my goof up. Appreciate it and it's fixed. Yes, Patrick is putting a lot on the line for his friends. Hope all goes well!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
We now have a new series of challenges to overcome as gangsters seek the treasure. I'm sure Sandra will do whatever she can to assist with the new plan. The team will fool the gangsters with fake treasure, but they still have to search for the real treasure. Hopefully, nothing else goes wrong.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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We now have a new series of challenges to overcome as gangsters seek the treasure. I'm sure Sandra will do whatever she can to assist with the new plan. The team will fool the gangsters with fake treasure, but they still have to search for the real treasure. Hopefully, nothing else goes wrong.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Well, I can't promise that nothing else will happen, but Sandra is definitely a fighter and she wants to see this through. Thanks for continuing to read and enjoy.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
It sounds like they are devising a plan of sorts. I have faith that you will bring this story to a happy conclusion. It keeps getting better with each chapter.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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It sounds like they are devising a plan of sorts. I have faith that you will bring this story to a happy conclusion. It keeps getting better with each chapter.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Happy conclusions are my motto! It's a rough road but I think Sandra and the gang will make it through. Or at least I have my fingers crossed.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ulla
Another great, chapter, Carol and as you say there are a lot of twists and turns. You certainly know how to set them all up. As you can tell, I do love the story. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Another great, chapter, Carol and as you say there are a lot of twists and turns. You certainly know how to set them all up. As you can tell, I do love the story. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thanks, Ulla. I am thrilled that you are enjoying the story. I know you have different feelings about what awaits us after we die, but that's okay. I just hope you can accept what I write as part of the story (fiction or not) and find enjoyment in it. Thank you so much. Hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
I am sure Sandra will be up for it - she's already shown plenty of courage and initiative. It is a dramatic plan and timing will be important, but it just could work! Well done. Very imaginative.
Wendy
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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I am sure Sandra will be up for it - she's already shown plenty of courage and initiative. It is a dramatic plan and timing will be important, but it just could work! Well done. Very imaginative.
Wendy
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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I don't think it will be easy but Sandra's a fighter.... Keeping this story from her boss has been a big challenge. Let's see what happens!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Now that is a good plan, I like it, and I think it will work. But will Sandra agree? If she's like this Sandra, she will. So let's hope this works, and that Patrick will get back in plenty of time. We don't want to lose another one. Well, I know Victoria was bad, but she was good in the end. This has turned into a story that would make a wonderful film, Carol. I can picture it on the screen. Well done again, my clever friend. Love and hugs, from Me. xxxxx
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Now that is a good plan, I like it, and I think it will work. But will Sandra agree? If she's like this Sandra, she will. So let's hope this works, and that Patrick will get back in plenty of time. We don't want to lose another one. Well, I know Victoria was bad, but she was good in the end. This has turned into a story that would make a wonderful film, Carol. I can picture it on the screen. Well done again, my clever friend. Love and hugs, from Me. xxxxx
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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I think Sandra is up for just about anything, but it might not be as easy as they hope.... But then it wouldn't be one of my stories if it was, now would it? LOL I keep thinking I need to give Victoria a branch of hope somewhere because she did try in the end...but I'm not sure yet. How thrilling! Just imagine my story in print or on the big screen. Might make my son take notice if I stole his thunder. LOL
Smiles, hugs and love, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
It sounds like they have hatched out a plan. Lets hope it goes well. Have you got a romantic angle worked for Sandra. Ever since she been here there have been nothing but ghosts around her. Now maybe the City detective witll be attracted her and want to help her out.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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It sounds like they have hatched out a plan. Lets hope it goes well. Have you got a romantic angle worked for Sandra. Ever since she been here there have been nothing but ghosts around her. Now maybe the City detective witll be attracted her and want to help her out.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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I've never thought of a romantic move for Sandra, but I might have to give it some thought. She doesn't seem the type to fall for a ghost and the pickings are pretty slim right now....except for the detective but he's a little old for her. Her father might frown on that! LOl
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am positive Sandra is up for the challenge. I can't believe she isn't. Thank you for sharing this post with us. I enjoyed reading.
William turned and stared at his friend. Patrick sighed, "No risk, no gain." (sighed.)
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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I am positive Sandra is up for the challenge. I can't believe she isn't. Thank you for sharing this post with us. I enjoyed reading.
William turned and stared at his friend. Patrick sighed, "No risk, no gain." (sighed.)
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Of course, it must have been one of the ghosts who kicked out the correct punctuation, right? Not hardly! It's this fuzzy brain of mine. Thanks as always, Barbara.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
I guess reunions are wonderful, especially when one meets one's grandfather, I don't mind the fact that my grandchildren are better versions of myself, that's the way it's supposed to be, but at least they've discovered the way to foil the crooks from administering their crooked plans, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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I guess reunions are wonderful, especially when one meets one's grandfather, I don't mind the fact that my grandchildren are better versions of myself, that's the way it's supposed to be, but at least they've discovered the way to foil the crooks from administering their crooked plans, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much, Roy, for stopping by to check on our ghostly situation. Putting their heads together helped, but can they pull it off? I guess we wait and see!
Smiles, Carol