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Storm Whiplash

a 1-6-1 poem

3 total reviews 
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi
This is a succinct description of how the wind blows and damages
trees in a storm. Nice choice of artwork to illustrate the word,
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day.
Joan




 Comment Written 26-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, Joan.
reply by dragonpoet on 26-Jun-2024
    Don't mention it.
    Joan
Comment from Reanna Ashburn
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I thought it was a good poem that portrayed your meaning with the limited amount of words due to the parameters. Once you read the poem and then your comment, it allows the meaning and picture to make an impact.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, Reanna, for taking the time to review my poem and comment.
Comment from papa55mike
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Each storm coming through loosens the soil, roots, and branches until they snap. We've dealt with that before! What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
    Thank you so much, Mike, for sharing and praising my poem.