The Tainted
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Up The Mountain Again "A fantasy story following hunter Taya
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Comment from jim vecchio
This is a very good addition to your continuing story, worthy of six if I had it. To mention even a tiny typo makes me feel so bad, but there is a tiny one: "For as long as I exit, politics will be a part of my life," should that be: "as long as I exist"?
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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This is a very good addition to your continuing story, worthy of six if I had it. To mention even a tiny typo makes me feel so bad, but there is a tiny one: "For as long as I exit, politics will be a part of my life," should that be: "as long as I exist"?
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Thank you for letting me know! I'm glad you liked the chapter!
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I try not to nitpick. I just want all others to do nothing but praise your writing.
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I appreciate it when you point it out
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I promise always to be kind.
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Lol you are so it?s all good
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Can't wait till the next chapter!
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Nicely written.
"Demi" I quietly called his name. - Missing punctuation after Demi.
"Taya" he snapped out of his reverie and looked at me in surprise. - Missing punctuation after Taya.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Nicely written.
"Demi" I quietly called his name. - Missing punctuation after Demi.
"Taya" he snapped out of his reverie and looked at me in surprise. - Missing punctuation after Taya.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Thank you!