Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi,

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

You know that susurrant and silent don't seem to go together. But in a poem they can

It's kind of like the silent scream. There is a sound, but nobody hears it. Or the scream is only in the screamer's mind

I enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2024

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

A lovely and romantic offering in this difficult form, mystery poet. You did a splendid job in all aspects. Beautifully written and illustrated for the contest.
All my best with this one!
Sally Law :))

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024

Sally,

Thank you for you much appreciated review of my poem Heartstrings Blush. Writing romantic poetry it appears is a special gift I seem to have been blessed with. I am guilty of being a true diehard romantic at heart.

All the best,

Eugene

reply by Sally Law on 06-Jul-2024

Most welcome! A truly beautiful poem Eugene!
Sal :))

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

My susurrant is a six-year-old who refuses to turn her volume down on her tablet. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2024

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

An excellent entry for the 1-6-1 writing prompt. Three unique choices for your rhyming words that work well in your poem. Nicely done. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2024