Madness
When the voices won't stop2 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I think you did a good job with the rhymes in this 1-6-1 poem. I can relate to this, which is a good thing because it means you expressed yourself well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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I think you did a good job with the rhymes in this 1-6-1 poem. I can relate to this, which is a good thing because it means you expressed yourself well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from RodG
I think a therapist would readily agree that hearing sounds "surrounding" you could be a symptom of madness. Please do not be offended by my rating, but the prompt says all THREE LINES must rhyme. None of yours do.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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I think a therapist would readily agree that hearing sounds "surrounding" you could be a symptom of madness. Please do not be offended by my rating, but the prompt says all THREE LINES must rhyme. None of yours do.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Thank you. I honestly missed that part of the description completely. I have had a lot going on lately. I appreciate your pointing that out, and I have made corrections, if you would be interested in checking it out again.
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You?re getting there with partial rhymes?sounds, frown. Keep working at it.