No Contest!
When Trump's in the race it's...11 total reviews
Comment from Claire Tennant
Congratulations! Correct observation. Brilliant poem, wise thoughts and read by a Scots-born Aussie who can't officially vote but has in her heart.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Congratulations! Correct observation. Brilliant poem, wise thoughts and read by a Scots-born Aussie who can't officially vote but has in her heart.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Wow! Thank you for this terrific 6 star review...it means a lot to me. :)
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Most welcome
Comment from karenina
I don't have to agree with your political choice to say your poem is very well written, Sharon. I think it's great that you and Jake share first place--when you are on opposite sides of this upcoming presidential vote.
Thursday is coming up fast. The debate should be interesting!
Karenina
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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I don't have to agree with your political choice to say your poem is very well written, Sharon. I think it's great that you and Jake share first place--when you are on opposite sides of this upcoming presidential vote.
Thursday is coming up fast. The debate should be interesting!
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Thank you for reading my poem, l really appreciate it. :)
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Happy to do so!
Comment from patcelaw
This is a real written and I wish you the very best in the contest and you have a lovely day and may you have a great week God bless. Keep writing and keep sharing with us.Patricia
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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This is a real written and I wish you the very best in the contest and you have a lovely day and may you have a great week God bless. Keep writing and keep sharing with us.Patricia
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you, that means a lot to me. :)
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is a good poem about your opinion. I don't want to vote for either really. Biden is too old and weak. You know Trump is just 3 years younger than Biden. I think Trump loves himself more than the country.
If you think he loves the country he wouldn't have incited the Jan 6th riot.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a good week.
Joan
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Hi
This is a good poem about your opinion. I don't want to vote for either really. Biden is too old and weak. You know Trump is just 3 years younger than Biden. I think Trump loves himself more than the country.
If you think he loves the country he wouldn't have incited the Jan 6th riot.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a good week.
Joan
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Thanks for reading my poem. He didn't incite the riots..he called for a peaceful demonstration. You can actually hear him say that. Anyway, l appreciate you. :)
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You're welcome.
Joan
Comment from judiverse
Right on! Excellent work with your rhyme and flow. You also show logic in your presentation, with definite references to both Trump or Biden. I predict they'll have Biden so revved up with pills or whatever before the debate, he'll come out smoking. He may not collapse until after the debate. I've seen Biden on TV at many different events, and he reminds me of your father in a memory care facility. You and the staff are constantly worrying that he'll wander off and walk into traffic. They will certainly play the "convicted felon" card with Trump, and that's backfired so far. Didn't get a fair trial and has the right to appeal. I hate to think of what Trump will be subjected to if he's elected, but I may end up voting for him, even though I don't like his demeanor. I'd feel safer with him in charge. Excellent entry. judi
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Right on! Excellent work with your rhyme and flow. You also show logic in your presentation, with definite references to both Trump or Biden. I predict they'll have Biden so revved up with pills or whatever before the debate, he'll come out smoking. He may not collapse until after the debate. I've seen Biden on TV at many different events, and he reminds me of your father in a memory care facility. You and the staff are constantly worrying that he'll wander off and walk into traffic. They will certainly play the "convicted felon" card with Trump, and that's backfired so far. Didn't get a fair trial and has the right to appeal. I hate to think of what Trump will be subjected to if he's elected, but I may end up voting for him, even though I don't like his demeanor. I'd feel safer with him in charge. Excellent entry. judi
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Thank you for this terrific 6 star review...and for reading my poem....it's very appreciated.
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You're very welcome,
Comment from Dr. Nad
It took some courage to write this one. I'm sure you'll get some flack. You had a choice to make and you Made it. Just think if you had praised Biden and jumped on Trump you would have been applauded and there would be no feedback. Oh well you made your bed . Thanks.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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It took some courage to write this one. I'm sure you'll get some flack. You had a choice to make and you Made it. Just think if you had praised Biden and jumped on Trump you would have been applauded and there would be no feedback. Oh well you made your bed . Thanks.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Thank you for reading. I'm not afraid of flack, l really have to be honest about it. I appreciate this understanding review. :)
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As I reread what I wrote to you in the review I think I left my thoughts a little bit ambiguous. I guess that's all right, but let me put it like this I voted for your poem in the contest with gusto.
Comment from Earl Corp
Interesting take you took on this prompt mystery writer. It would have been great if you could somehow work into your poem a vote for Biden is actually a vote for Kamala. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Interesting take you took on this prompt mystery writer. It would have been great if you could somehow work into your poem a vote for Biden is actually a vote for Kamala. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Thank you, that's a great idea! I appreciate this nice review. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have been astounded at the hate directed at Trump over the past years and this is because he has been a threat to Biden's presidency. Biden has had his chance to prove himself and he has stumbled over one blunder after another. The world is not safe with Biden at the helm. Your poem made me smile as these two fight it out to the bitter end. We will have the same campaign in England as I fear the labour party will get in next time. God help us all if they win, us poor pensioners will suffer and the stability of our country is at risk. I enjoyed your post for this contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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I have been astounded at the hate directed at Trump over the past years and this is because he has been a threat to Biden's presidency. Biden has had his chance to prove himself and he has stumbled over one blunder after another. The world is not safe with Biden at the helm. Your poem made me smile as these two fight it out to the bitter end. We will have the same campaign in England as I fear the labour party will get in next time. God help us all if they win, us poor pensioners will suffer and the stability of our country is at risk. I enjoyed your post for this contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much. I always appreciate your viewpoint.
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a good poem for this contest Biden VS Trump. I think CNN moderators Dana Bash and Jake Tapper will ask tough questions that neither can truly anticipate.
My guess is both of them will do a good job with Trump bluffing his way through policy questions and Biden thinking of too many things at once to distill the salient points.
Wishing you much luck with the voters. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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This is a good poem for this contest Biden VS Trump. I think CNN moderators Dana Bash and Jake Tapper will ask tough questions that neither can truly anticipate.
My guess is both of them will do a good job with Trump bluffing his way through policy questions and Biden thinking of too many things at once to distill the salient points.
Wishing you much luck with the voters. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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I think you're right. Thanks for reading. :)
Comment from Julie Helms
I agree with you politically, AND you actually made it into a recognizable poem, unlike a few other entries I've read. Best of luck in the contest, and pray to God, for the sake of this country, he does well in unrigged voting!
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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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I agree with you politically, AND you actually made it into a recognizable poem, unlike a few other entries I've read. Best of luck in the contest, and pray to God, for the sake of this country, he does well in unrigged voting!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Thank you for this great review and for agreeing with me....both are very appreciated. :)
