2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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6 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
That's a very dark time. Not even the moon is there to be a companion to his man who is stuck with his sad memories and too much to drink to forget them. That's quite the definition of loneliness.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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That's a very dark time. Not even the moon is there to be a companion to his man who is stuck with his sad memories and too much to drink to forget them. That's quite the definition of loneliness.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you, big sister, I appreciate your review.
love,
marival
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Nobody should ever be alone, especially on a moonless and starless night. Not only that, through in drinking, not at all good. Thank you for sharing this emotional poem with us.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Nobody should ever be alone, especially on a moonless and starless night. Not only that, through in drinking, not at all good. Thank you for sharing this emotional poem with us.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
aww sad yet interesting - and thought-provoking... i'm sure many seniors feel this way a lot... especially the homeless...
a great senryu with a great imagistic message
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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aww sad yet interesting - and thought-provoking... i'm sure many seniors feel this way a lot... especially the homeless...
a great senryu with a great imagistic message
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from dovemarie
Hi Gypsy, moving senryu about a lonely old man drinking. I could see from the picture that he was "lonesome' I have passed by many elderly people sitting on their porches and in their yards, and they are probably lonely too. Dove
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Hi Gypsy, moving senryu about a lonely old man drinking. I could see from the picture that he was "lonesome' I have passed by many elderly people sitting on their porches and in their yards, and they are probably lonely too. Dove
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Once again, you manage to create a presentation that fits so superbly to the theme of the verse. You skilfully describe the essence of loneliness in your image and imagery. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Once again, you manage to create a presentation that fits so superbly to the theme of the verse. You skilfully describe the essence of loneliness in your image and imagery. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 23-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was like a scene in a movie. I could see the man, shadows creeping in from the sides. A very desolate backdrop. Then the focus on him and his bottle. He would have a home spun soliloqy, of course. Well done. Gretchen
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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This was like a scene in a movie. I could see the man, shadows creeping in from the sides. A very desolate backdrop. Then the focus on him and his bottle. He would have a home spun soliloqy, of course. Well done. Gretchen
Comment Written 23-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen
Gypsy