Lair Of The Seductress
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Weaker Man"Book Four Wolf Bend Series
6 total reviews
Comment from Thesis
Great flow and storyline. The scene you developed has a lot going on which Lilith was able to use to her advantage. Adding a cocky FBI agent who wanted to be famous, and the animosity he had for the Chief worked in Lilith's favor, leading to his death.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Great flow and storyline. The scene you developed has a lot going on which Lilith was able to use to her advantage. Adding a cocky FBI agent who wanted to be famous, and the animosity he had for the Chief worked in Lilith's favor, leading to his death.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Thank you! I appreciate you jumping in!
Comment from Ulla
Wow, she's something else isn't she? Now David is out of the way but what about poor Greg? How is is going to get out of the conundrum he's in? All bar. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Wow, she's something else isn't she? Now David is out of the way but what about poor Greg? How is is going to get out of the conundrum he's in? All bar. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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We shall see, dear friend.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Poor Greg , ... Lilith is no match.... I wonder how he is going to get out of situation.
Agent David Harkins, was an idiot, a greedy one.
Well done!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novali
succubus
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Poor Greg , ... Lilith is no match.... I wonder how he is going to get out of situation.
Agent David Harkins, was an idiot, a greedy one.
Well done!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novali
succubus
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Thanks, my friend. This is wrapping up!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
So much drama and excitement here, Doug! And all done at record pace. David fell right into her trap and is now no more, making Greg, in contrast, look so much stronger and resilient, not to mention committed to his wife. He has to think fast now but, after this episode, I'm sure he's going to be more than a match for her. I found no edits in your chapter and enjoyed the supernatural element which isn't usually my thing. Well done, Doug! Looking forward to the next 3 chapters. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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So much drama and excitement here, Doug! And all done at record pace. David fell right into her trap and is now no more, making Greg, in contrast, look so much stronger and resilient, not to mention committed to his wife. He has to think fast now but, after this episode, I'm sure he's going to be more than a match for her. I found no edits in your chapter and enjoyed the supernatural element which isn't usually my thing. Well done, Doug! Looking forward to the next 3 chapters. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 23-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Debbie! I am so happy that you are enjoying this book!
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Very well done. But I sure don't see how you get three more chapters when Greg is just a kiss away from death.
to her exposed breasts and lower regions. - This is kinda petty, but maybe just 'region'?
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Very well done. But I sure don't see how you get three more chapters when Greg is just a kiss away from death.
to her exposed breasts and lower regions. - This is kinda petty, but maybe just 'region'?
Best wishes.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Well, I have to get Jesse and Jenny out of the way so I can finally kill Greg. Moohahahah
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Somehow Greg needs to figure out a way to get out of this mess. I know, or at least I hope, you have it figured out. I know help is on the way, but will it be soon enough. Maybe some of his former spirit people can help him.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Somehow Greg needs to figure out a way to get out of this mess. I know, or at least I hope, you have it figured out. I know help is on the way, but will it be soon enough. Maybe some of his former spirit people can help him.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Gregory is in a pickle. Appreciate that you are enjoying this book!