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Aiona's Poems

Viewing comments for Chapter 155 "Stepped on by a Raccoon"
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Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Aiona.
Sorry to hear about that seedling. It is amazing the damage animals can do to our plantings, whether a tree, flowers or a garden.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Hope you did well in the contest.
Have a nice day.
Joan

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
    Thanks for your review, Joan.
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a beautifully written five line poem and I enjoyed reading it very much I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I also wish you a very good weekend. God bless. Patricia

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
    Thank you for your review, Patricia!
Comment from Bill Schott
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This five-line poem, Stepped on by a Raccoon, has the proper formatting and sees the damage to the world's tiniest food by the grizzly paws of the awkward RAT-coon.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
    Thank you for your review, Bill. I checked on the other two seedlings, and they are okay!!!! LOL!