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Love lost6 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Losing a loved one is very hard, losing one to substance abuse is even harder. Thank you for sharing this emotionally filled contest entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Losing a loved one is very hard, losing one to substance abuse is even harder. Thank you for sharing this emotionally filled contest entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Thank you for this review and the high rating. This was a tough one to write, but holds close personal feelings.
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I could feel that as I read.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
How very sad this poem is, full of memories of someone who lost their way in life. A very touching post filled with grief for someone lost, your message was delivered with skill, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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How very sad this poem is, full of memories of someone who lost their way in life. A very touching post filled with grief for someone lost, your message was delivered with skill, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Thank you Dolly
This one had a very personal feel, I've recently lost a former friend to addictions. He couldn't straighten out his life, even with help of family and friends. He was my age mid-fifties but looked decades older. Walking my old dog and thinking of him inspired this poem.
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Author,
I like your comparison of the old house, your dog, etc. to describe your grief for the subject of this poem.
Nice words for these feelings.
Good luck in the love poem poetry contest.
Cindy
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Author,
I like your comparison of the old house, your dog, etc. to describe your grief for the subject of this poem.
Nice words for these feelings.
Good luck in the love poem poetry contest.
Cindy
Comment Written 23-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Cindy
Thank you for your positive review of my poem. I mostly write fiction prose. This was a departure for me, perhaps I should write more poetry. This one has gotten tremendous feedback, including yours, so thanks again.
Comment from jessizero
This reflective poem was very sad, but well-written in a lovely way. I like the way you just trailed off at the end of the poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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This reflective poem was very sad, but well-written in a lovely way. I like the way you just trailed off at the end of the poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is am excellent poem and your nite helps to explain it's full meaning. Thank you for sharing this. One suggestion is to make the font a bit lighter colored. I had some trouble reading the words.
Best wishes
Alex
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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This is am excellent poem and your nite helps to explain it's full meaning. Thank you for sharing this. One suggestion is to make the font a bit lighter colored. I had some trouble reading the words.
Best wishes
Alex
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. I went back and changed the font. Thank you.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was well done. I especially liked the last line. Your writing captures raw emotions with honesty and clarity. It's impossible for your writing to not resonate deeply with anyone who has experienced loss or emotional turmoil. Thank you for sharing such heartfelt words.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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I thought this was well done. I especially liked the last line. Your writing captures raw emotions with honesty and clarity. It's impossible for your writing to not resonate deeply with anyone who has experienced loss or emotional turmoil. Thank you for sharing such heartfelt words.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Michael
Thank you for such a positive review of this poem and my other stories as well. Its comments like this that spurn writers on to greater heights. I barely write poetry, I don't think I write it very well. Your comments have bolstered my confidence.