Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi
Well if eating humans doesn't stop her from being friends with the alien nothing will. It show stops giving him chocolate, will he nibble on her?
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy your weekend.
Joan

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024

I believe that the chocolate would prevent him from eating her, yes. LOL. Thanks for your review.

reply by dragonpoet on 23-Jun-2024

You're welcome, Monica.
Joan

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very cute and well written 100 Word story you have penned for the contest. I love the imagery of the little aliens. You used great descriptive words. So neat you and your grandchildren came up with this. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024

Thank you so much, Teri. I will let them know that you liked the story.

reply by Teri7 on 21-Jun-2024

You are so welcome! Please let them know. Who knows - maybe one day they will be amazing authors!

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Never had the pleasure or displeasure of grandbabies, but I am okay with that as the two daughters we raised did okay, and I say that because they take after Pa instead of Ma so... the world isn't as good as it would have been if they emulated Ma.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024

Thank you. I don't know what is wrong with my daughters, to be honest. They are NOT the people that I raised them to be, that's for sure. My grandbabies, however, are my absolute heart and soul.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This one-hundred-word flash fiction story, When Sarah Met Bob, takes this chance encounter as far as you can while in a pool and avoiding being eaten by a Googelian.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024

Thanks. It was fun coming up with the story with my grandkids.