Days Gone By
A man reminices23 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
Congratulations on your well deserved win. I loved this story, because, even though time had passed and the man was no longer powerful and possibly not wealthy, he still had the beautiful woman. My mother used to say, a man's glory is a woman.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Congratulations on your well deserved win. I loved this story, because, even though time had passed and the man was no longer powerful and possibly not wealthy, he still had the beautiful woman. My mother used to say, a man's glory is a woman.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Hello dear Lorraine... thanks for reading my little flash and for enjoying it of course. Thanks so much for the review and your kind comments.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Author,
I love this piece of fiction; the ending was a nice surprise.
It tells of an undying love, one that endured time, yet was still fresh and exciting.
Congratulations on your first place.
Cindy
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Author,
I love this piece of fiction; the ending was a nice surprise.
It tells of an undying love, one that endured time, yet was still fresh and exciting.
Congratulations on your first place.
Cindy
Comment Written 23-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much for enjoying my flash. I love happy endings. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aww, no wonder it won, what a lovely little flash fiction story. I loved the ending, it was so romantic, and sweet. But what a miserable cabby!. He'll be old one day. Loved it, my clever friend. Love and hugs! Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Aww, no wonder it won, what a lovely little flash fiction story. I loved the ending, it was so romantic, and sweet. But what a miserable cabby!. He'll be old one day. Loved it, my clever friend. Love and hugs! Sandra xxx
Comment Written 23-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Thanks! I thought you might like this one. Many thought he was going to get murdered, but instead he ended happily ever after with the love of his life. thanks!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Carol,
I read this post in the contest, and even voted for it, but I guess I missed reviewing it along the way. I guess I was too busy reading massive amounts of ghost chapters, lol.
It was a great entry, and by far the best. Congratulations on the win,
Hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Hi Carol,
I read this post in the contest, and even voted for it, but I guess I missed reviewing it along the way. I guess I was too busy reading massive amounts of ghost chapters, lol.
It was a great entry, and by far the best. Congratulations on the win,
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much, Rhonda. Thanks so much for your time and wonderful comments regarding my flash. I appreciate it very much. Have a great day!
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I got to enjoy it three times, lol. Great FF!!
Comment from Dawn Munro
Congratulations on your well-earned win. It's not easy to tell a story convincingly in only one hundred words, but you did it, and a touching one at that!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Congratulations on your well-earned win. It's not easy to tell a story convincingly in only one hundred words, but you did it, and a touching one at that!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Thanks for the kind review on my flash. Dawn. Appreciate it very much. Have a great day!
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is an excellent entry for the contest. I love the happy ending. So many stories on this site have sad or tragic conclusions. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest. Nice work.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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This is an excellent entry for the contest. I love the happy ending. So many stories on this site have sad or tragic conclusions. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest. Nice work.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much for your time and wonderful comments regarding my flash. I appreciate it very much. Have a great day!
Comment from PUPA
Don't we all get such moments ? I could picture the man who lost his glory days, but thank god, his beautiful woman is waiting. That was a glimpse of a positive smile in the story. I like that. Good luck.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Don't we all get such moments ? I could picture the man who lost his glory days, but thank god, his beautiful woman is waiting. That was a glimpse of a positive smile in the story. I like that. Good luck.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much for your time and wonderful comments regarding my flash. I appreciate it very much. Have a great day!
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is a good story, He has the most important thing in life, love. His power he can live without. It seems the woman he couldn't.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend
Joan
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Hi
This is a good story, He has the most important thing in life, love. His power he can live without. It seems the woman he couldn't.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend
Joan
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much for your time and wonderful comments regarding my flash. I appreciate it very much. Have a great day!
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Don't mention it, Begin Again.
Joan
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 100 Word Story writing prompt. This a was good flash fiction. It told a complete story and then left us with a bit of a twist at the end. Good job.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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An excellent entry for the 100 Word Story writing prompt. This a was good flash fiction. It told a complete story and then left us with a bit of a twist at the end. Good job.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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Good morning, Marilyn. Thank you for stopping buy to read my little flash and comment. Always appreciate it! Have a great day!
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
That was sweet. However, I think this makes a stronger last sentence. "He may be older now, but lives forever young in his memories. " I am still not through moving. I will be looking in from time to time until I am settled. I miss being here and all the friendship. Good work here. Karen
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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That was sweet. However, I think this makes a stronger last sentence. "He may be older now, but lives forever young in his memories. " I am still not through moving. I will be looking in from time to time until I am settled. I miss being here and all the friendship. Good work here. Karen
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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Sorry to here you are still battling with moving boxes, Ugh! Hopefully you will be back soon. Thanks for stopping in to read my little flash. Appreciat it very much. Have a great day!
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