Mulberry Magic
Fruity Cinquain5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This cinquain, Mulberry Magic, has the proper formatting and takes the readers through the experience of picking these colorful and stain-promoting jewels.
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This cinquain, Mulberry Magic, has the proper formatting and takes the readers through the experience of picking these colorful and stain-promoting jewels.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem captures the delight of enjoying mulberries! The concise structure and imagery brings me to the tree! I could feel the joy of plucking and savoring fruit from the hanging branches.
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Your poem captures the delight of enjoying mulberries! The concise structure and imagery brings me to the tree! I could feel the joy of plucking and savoring fruit from the hanging branches.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a good sensory description and poem of your childhood Summer. It reminded me of stories about fig trees that my Das used to share of his childhood on the Greek Island of Milos. Excellent writing and presentation
Best wishes
Alex
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This is a good sensory description and poem of your childhood Summer. It reminded me of stories about fig trees that my Das used to share of his childhood on the Greek Island of Milos. Excellent writing and presentation
Best wishes
Alex
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Summer Fruit writing Prompt. I had never heard of a Mulberry until a few years ago when a friend made me mulberry jam. It was the best jam I'd ever had. Enjoyed your poem
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An excellent entry for the Summer Fruit writing Prompt. I had never heard of a Mulberry until a few years ago when a friend made me mulberry jam. It was the best jam I'd ever had. Enjoyed your poem
Comment Written 21-Jun-2024
Comment from jessizero
I liked your "fruity" cinquain. You got the syllable counts right, and the poem brought back happy childhood memories of sticky fingers from berries. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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I liked your "fruity" cinquain. You got the syllable counts right, and the poem brought back happy childhood memories of sticky fingers from berries. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024