I'm Just Little
A little boy speaks.9 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, I'm Just Little, gives the readers a list of activities we likely grow out of, but as of now, children are absolute beginners and will have to grow --eventually.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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This poem, I'm Just Little, gives the readers a list of activities we likely grow out of, but as of now, children are absolute beginners and will have to grow --eventually.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Bill, for a great review.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A very cute poem, mystery poet.
It so reminds me of little kids, I think more boys than girls, at least mine anyway. Still, very appropriate for a rhyming children's poem.
Best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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A very cute poem, mystery poet.
It so reminds me of little kids, I think more boys than girls, at least mine anyway. Still, very appropriate for a rhyming children's poem.
Best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
Comment Written 21-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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Rhonda, thank you so much for a wonderful review. I've had lots of little children in my life to inspire me - from my own to grandchildren to great grandchildren!
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Very nice!!
Comment from Wendy G
This is an excellent poem for young children because they will like the repeated words and also be able to predict the coming rhyme. It has good rhyme, a good metre and easy flow. Well done. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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This is an excellent poem for young children because they will like the repeated words and also be able to predict the coming rhyme. It has good rhyme, a good metre and easy flow. Well done. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much, Wendy, for a great review and your wishes for the contest.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
What a great verse! Ideal for children with those repetitive rhyming lines. Love the way you've got the antonym to rhyme, very clever. This excellent verse really does seem to capture the boy in the visual. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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What a great verse! Ideal for children with those repetitive rhyming lines. Love the way you've got the antonym to rhyme, very clever. This excellent verse really does seem to capture the boy in the visual. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie for your kind review and wishes. Actually the little boy in the picture matched my rhyme!
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Author,
Your poem is light and sweet. A great entry for the children's rhyming poem. Could be any boy or Tom-girl's mantra.
The photo complements you nice poem.
Good luck with all your writing.
Cindy
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Author,
Your poem is light and sweet. A great entry for the children's rhyming poem. Could be any boy or Tom-girl's mantra.
The photo complements you nice poem.
Good luck with all your writing.
Cindy
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Cindy. I really appreciate your great review and your wishes for my writing!
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is a good poem for the contest. It talks like a little kid would about what us mean adults ask them to do.
Good luck with the prompt.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the week.
Joan
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Hi
This is a good poem for the contest. It talks like a little kid would about what us mean adults ask them to do.
Good luck with the prompt.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the week.
Joan
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Joan, for your great response. I just love the way the little ones express themselves. I appreciate your good wishes for the contest, and I'm going to work on the healthy part. I hope the rest of the week is good for you, too!
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You're welcome for the review, Verna, and thanks for the good wishes.
Joan
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Children's rhyming poem writing prompt. What a cute poem and one told in a child-like voice that will definitely appeal to children. Nicely done. Thank yu for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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An excellent entry for the Children's rhyming poem writing prompt. What a cute poem and one told in a child-like voice that will definitely appeal to children. Nicely done. Thank yu for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Thank you for a great review. I appreciate it. Just had my 7th great grandchild- there have been lots of children in my life!
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
I thought your entire poem was cute and appropriate
Now, I'm not saying that if you read this to a child, he will understand. But he might get a kick out of the phonetics involved.
Toodle do. Toodle do.
I enjoyed reading your phone
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
I thought your entire poem was cute and appropriate
Now, I'm not saying that if you read this to a child, he will understand. But he might get a kick out of the phonetics involved.
Toodle do. Toodle do.
I enjoyed reading your phone
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your delightful review!
Comment from jessizero
This was a sweet and fun rhyming poem for children. I loved the way you used the repeating words and rhymes. The last two sentences were the perfect way to sum up the poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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This was a sweet and fun rhyming poem for children. I loved the way you used the repeating words and rhymes. The last two sentences were the perfect way to sum up the poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Jessi, for a lovely review!
