Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

I think for stand-out impact, this is eye-catching and excellent! The trifle in the visual is practically touchable and I like the way you've included all the ingredients, making this into a recipe. Definitely yummy! Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024

Thank you, Debbie :)

Comment from Sallyo

Excellent

This is a stylish entry with its alliteration and consonance. Mind you, it doesn't hurt that I like trifle... I also like the inclusion of the verb (unless it's an adjective...) TRIFLED.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024

Thank you, Sally. I was going to change it but decided not to trifle with it haha :)

Comment from Kennedy Jaymes

Good

Author,
This is an excellent Cinquain poem! By reading your work I could imagine this sweet dessert! You described it so well that now I myself want one, good job!

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024

Thank you, Kennedy :)

Comment from Nicki.B

Excellent

Well that's made me want a big juicy slice of trifle. Lovely little poem, fresh and light a little delight. I love the naughty drop of sherry in the trifle. Well done

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024

Thank you, Nicki :)