Comment from
Kennedy Jaymes
Author,
I enjoyed poem. It reminded me of the sweet tastes of summer and made me really want to try one of these. Though one little note that I would make is to capitalize the beginning words of each line. But overall it is a wonderful poem!
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
Glad you enjoyed the read, I?m sure you will find this drink refreshing this summer.
Comment from
dragonpoet
Hi,
This is a good entry for the prompt. Nice mix of words and artwork. It looks like it would be a healthy and refreshing drink.
Good luck with the prompt.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of your day and week.
Joan
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
Thanks for the positive feedback, it s definitely a refreshing drink and quick to make too!
reply by dragonpoet on 20-Jun-2024