Hannah Rose's Special Day
Second in the adventures of Hannah Rose series5 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
I wish I had six stars to give you, but I am all out. This is a very cute and very well written Children's rhyming poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very cute imagery from the art work you and your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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I wish I had six stars to give you, but I am all out. This is a very cute and very well written Children's rhyming poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very cute imagery from the art work you and your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much...it's a new series based on my granddaughter Hannah Rose. I appreciate this nice review. :)
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I really enjoyed this.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
I think this is a delightful poem. So positive. No negative energy at all. That's what kids need.
I like how you documented all the things you can do
at a park. And then she got her favorite dinner with ice cream.
Here. Are you really trying to say that she was on top of the cloud? Or that a big black cloud was above her
"Hannah Rose ran very fast,
up above a big black cloud
I really enjoyed your story
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
I think this is a delightful poem. So positive. No negative energy at all. That's what kids need.
I like how you documented all the things you can do
at a park. And then she got her favorite dinner with ice cream.
Here. Are you really trying to say that she was on top of the cloud? Or that a big black cloud was above her
"Hannah Rose ran very fast,
up above a big black cloud
I really enjoyed your story
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Hahaha..under the cloud. Thank you for this terrific review. :)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aww, that was such a sweet poem for children, and me! I love children's stories, and poems. This one had everything that children would love to read, and happen to them. Wonderful to read, and lovely presentation. Well done and good luck! :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Aww, that was such a sweet poem for children, and me! I love children's stories, and poems. This one had everything that children would love to read, and happen to them. Wonderful to read, and lovely presentation. Well done and good luck! :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this thoughtful review. :)
Comment from Nathan Allen
This poem is charming and done in a way that would be very appealing to young children. It uses rhyme and relatable content to create a lovely atmosphere. This poem has a good use of language and and overall warming feeling.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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This poem is charming and done in a way that would be very appealing to young children. It uses rhyme and relatable content to create a lovely atmosphere. This poem has a good use of language and and overall warming feeling.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much for the great review and 6 shining stars!
Comment from Kennedy Jaymes
Author,
I enjoyed reading your post. I feel very comforted while reading your poem and can imagine in my head the story as it goes along. I believe that this would be a very fun poem for a child to read and could imagine many enjoying it.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Author,
I enjoyed reading your post. I feel very comforted while reading your poem and can imagine in my head the story as it goes along. I believe that this would be a very fun poem for a child to read and could imagine many enjoying it.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Thank you for reading. If you don't mind me asking. .l see you gave me 4 stars..is there anything l could do to improve it?
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My only comment is that the jump from hide and seek to a restaurant was a bit sudden. But overall, this is a truly wonderful poem!
