Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Your cinquain flows with a delightful description of nectarines. I like the rhyme you add. And the first and last lines say it all in the most succinct form. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024

Thanks so much, l appreciate your reading my poem. :)

Comment from RodG

Excellent

What a delightful tribute to nectarines. Indeed, they are juicy and sweet. Your fourth line is so true! I truly enjoyed this well-written Cinquain, and I wish you good luck in the contest.
Rod

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024

Thank you, I'm glad that you liked it. :)

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was a great entry for the "summer fruit" writing prompt. You made the nectarines sound irresistible. You got the syllable count right, and I liked your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024

Thank you, it's very appreciated. :)

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

Yep. Nectarines are my favorite fruit. I like them even better than peaches. Maybe it's that fuzz thing going on

I thought the last line brought the whole thing home.

I enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024

Thank you, it's always nice to hear from you. :)

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

This is a wonderful, and tantalizing cinquain poem of summer fruit, mystery poet. Beautifully crafted and illustrated in this most difficult form.

Sending along my very best today as always, and my best wishes for the upcoming vote.
Sally Law :))

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024

Thank you for such a nice review. :)