A Surprise To My Eyes.
Next Time You Walk Under A tree, Look up and think about me.4 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
I voted for Little Bobby in the children's Poem contest but your creative poem did not go unnoticed. I just wished I had had two votes to deal out( sigh)
It s a great poem because it teaches one of the infinite wonders of Mother Nature.
These are the topics parents , teachers should be teaching children and not all that gender identity crap.. there are kindergartens that are poisoning innocent minds with harmful notions.
Your poem is educational and masterfully executed. Its wording is easy to comprehend for a child and all in rhyme too.
A delightful read even for an adult who loves wildlife like me!
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Ciao!
I voted for Little Bobby in the children's Poem contest but your creative poem did not go unnoticed. I just wished I had had two votes to deal out( sigh)
It s a great poem because it teaches one of the infinite wonders of Mother Nature.
These are the topics parents , teachers should be teaching children and not all that gender identity crap.. there are kindergartens that are poisoning innocent minds with harmful notions.
Your poem is educational and masterfully executed. Its wording is easy to comprehend for a child and all in rhyme too.
A delightful read even for an adult who loves wildlife like me!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is a nicely done educational poem. It is interesting. I didn't know about the clinger scales. The rhyme scheme works well.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of your week.
Joan
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Hi
This is a nicely done educational poem. It is interesting. I didn't know about the clinger scales. The rhyme scheme works well.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of your week.
Joan
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
Comment from jessizero
This was an adorable poem for a child! I never thought about how a snake climbs a tree, but it makes sense. Thank you for enlightening me. :) Best wishes to you.
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This was an adorable poem for a child! I never thought about how a snake climbs a tree, but it makes sense. Thank you for enlightening me. :) Best wishes to you.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2024
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
This seems like a good poem for a child. I'm thinking of the description you put at the top. When you're under a tree look for me. Is that the snake talking? Most Snakes are harmless , especially those that are in trees
Nice rhyming scheme. Good rythym and flow. I'm glad you know a lot about the Hiss-story of snakes.
I like the ending. But, if the snake falls, does it get hurt? I'm thinking no although I don't know why. I know that their skin is very stretchy because when they eat large prey, their stomachs stretch a lot.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
This seems like a good poem for a child. I'm thinking of the description you put at the top. When you're under a tree look for me. Is that the snake talking? Most Snakes are harmless , especially those that are in trees
Nice rhyming scheme. Good rythym and flow. I'm glad you know a lot about the Hiss-story of snakes.
I like the ending. But, if the snake falls, does it get hurt? I'm thinking no although I don't know why. I know that their skin is very stretchy because when they eat large prey, their stomachs stretch a lot.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2024
