The Tainted
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Surrounded"A fantasy story following hunter Taya
2 total reviews
Comment from jim vecchio
Another great chapter! Sooner or later, whenever a love is budding, there's as scene where the man takes off his shirt. Good thing it wasn't me. I would've scared Taya away! I can't wait till the next chapter. Are Taya and her sister to meet?
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Another great chapter! Sooner or later, whenever a love is budding, there's as scene where the man takes off his shirt. Good thing it wasn't me. I would've scared Taya away! I can't wait till the next chapter. Are Taya and her sister to meet?
Comment Written 19-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Yup only she sees him as a patient and he's embarrassed alone lol
Sure are!
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Looking forward to the meeting.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Very good plotting. Good work.
We'll have to take of your shirt." - (off)
Uhoh, maybe it's worse than I thought. - (Uh oh) space
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Very good plotting. Good work.
We'll have to take of your shirt." - (off)
Uhoh, maybe it's worse than I thought. - (Uh oh) space
Best wishes.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Thanks for the edits! Much appreciated