Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Yes, we are often tempted, but God will help us through those times. We just need to allow Him to work in our lives. I enjoyed reading this contest entry and wish you luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024

Thanks, Barbara.

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi, Terry

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

I'm impressed with your rhyming scheme. Rythym and flow are good. Not a set meter.

I think you are refreshing. A voice that needs to be heard. You had to be so brave to write this. I'm glad you did. It brought out the best in your poetry.

I liked the last half of the first stanza where libido gives desire a boost. I think your words matched what you were feeling. The other part I liked was the reference to weakly male

I really enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024

Super review, Pam. You make some very generous comments. Please accept my Best Wishes. Cheers, Terry.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I have fought demons in my sleep before, so I can appreciate this poem. I also liked your rhymes. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024

Thank you, J.