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inspiring poems for the souls and hearts

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Comment from jessizero
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I think this was a great piece of free verse for the contest. Your poem was mesmerizing, as advertised. The first and last lines were my favorites, though all your lines were good. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
    thank you very much for your support and kind words of encouragement, i am actually on fanstory . com to please the hearts and minds of lovely people like you
Comment from Erika Whittle
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The reflection of your pure soul through the mirrors of your eyes

This is just beautiful. I really like it, enough that I wish it was a little bit longer. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
    yes, that?s the goal of my  » mesmerising poetry «  it makes you imagine you?re with your loved one and that the world entirely vanishes around you, and that there?s nobody left but yourselves. My love poems are triggering the inner feelings of the readers and hopefully also enchanting their hearts ....