Comment from
Erika Whittle
Oh wow, that's impressive. Didn't use any of the common love words but definitely expressed love to its depths. A wonderful entry! Great job and good luck :)
Comment Written 19-Jun-2024
Comment from
Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.
What does putting paid mean? Just that you can check off something that you've completed?
I think you've captured everything about a healthy relationship. All of those things you touched upon spell L O V E.
Hope I didn't infect your poem by using the word love in this review. I know you weren't supposed to use it in your poem so I'll do it for you.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
Putting paid, Sealing or clinching the deal or promise. Thank you