Soul tapestry
Soul tapestry7 total reviews
Comment from EeanBlack
I know this person. She more than envelopes my soul. She has stolen it. Mind you, this is not a romantic coupling in the least. Well, at least not a physical one. Our lives are so parallel. Kindred? Soul mates? Just friends? So confusing.
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I know this person. She more than envelopes my soul. She has stolen it. Mind you, this is not a romantic coupling in the least. Well, at least not a physical one. Our lives are so parallel. Kindred? Soul mates? Just friends? So confusing.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
Comment from F. William Lester
For three lines, it says a lot. Nice visual and touching. I hope you did well in the contest. This should be a very competitive entry. Thanks for sharing it. Have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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For three lines, it says a lot. Nice visual and touching. I hope you did well in the contest. This should be a very competitive entry. Thanks for sharing it. Have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Hi William, thank you for your beautiful review.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Often something will weave it's way into our soul. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and want to wish you the best of luck with the contest.
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Often something will weave it's way into our soul. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and want to wish you the best of luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2024
Comment from estory
Nice haiku. Instead of the nature image, you had this art image of someone weaving their feelings into a tapestry wrapping around your soul. I like the wavering rhythm, very ethereal and dream like, and I like the image of the tapestry. It's not quite in the five seven five perfectly balanced format, but it captures the gist of it. estory
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Nice haiku. Instead of the nature image, you had this art image of someone weaving their feelings into a tapestry wrapping around your soul. I like the wavering rhythm, very ethereal and dream like, and I like the image of the tapestry. It's not quite in the five seven five perfectly balanced format, but it captures the gist of it. estory
Comment Written 19-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Wow, your review is amazing, so delicate and so to the point. Thank you so much:)
Comment from lyenochka
Good job in "addressing a loved one" with a "I love your" right from the first sentence. And that loved one could be God Himself. After all, He gives us dreams. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Good job in "addressing a loved one" with a "I love your" right from the first sentence. And that loved one could be God Himself. After all, He gives us dreams. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Hi Lenocika:) don't worry I am fine just lazy and busy:) thank you so much for this amazing review, stay safe my friend, the world lately it is going on the crazy side..
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It's always been crazy! God keeps us sane.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Iza
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
At, first when I saw weaving in the first line it made me think about orb spiders. They tear down their webs every night and weave a new one the next morning. They are the only spiders who do this
Now that I've probably made you sick from my spider commentary, let's move on
This is beautiful. What a nice vision of weaving a tapestry ( makes be think about Carol King and her song "Tapestry"). It is beautiful unto itself. A lot of people here play that song when somebody they love dies and cry to it.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi, Iza
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
At, first when I saw weaving in the first line it made me think about orb spiders. They tear down their webs every night and weave a new one the next morning. They are the only spiders who do this
Now that I've probably made you sick from my spider commentary, let's move on
This is beautiful. What a nice vision of weaving a tapestry ( makes be think about Carol King and her song "Tapestry"). It is beautiful unto itself. A lot of people here play that song when somebody they love dies and cry to it.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nice three line poem and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I wish you the best in the contest as well. May you have a lovely week and may your day tomorrow be blessed. Patricia .
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This is a very nice three line poem and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I wish you the best in the contest as well. May you have a lovely week and may your day tomorrow be blessed. Patricia .
Comment Written 18-Jun-2024
