Decadence
decadence4 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The title 'Decadence' caught my attention.
Meaning - the act or process of falling into an inferior condition or state; deterioration; decay:
Some historians hold that the fall of Rome can be attributed to internal decadence.
unrestrained or excessive self-indulgence
Mix that with 'Covered in grief crawl' And you have a very interesting poem here. Great job.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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The title 'Decadence' caught my attention.
Meaning - the act or process of falling into an inferior condition or state; deterioration; decay:
Some historians hold that the fall of Rome can be attributed to internal decadence.
unrestrained or excessive self-indulgence
Mix that with 'Covered in grief crawl' And you have a very interesting poem here. Great job.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Hi Barbara, thank you so much for this philosophical review, I love it, you made my day
Comment from lyenochka
Ah, but God can use even our broken dreams and make them nourish new dreams which He will give us to honor Him at the right times.
I liked how you rhymed "fall" and "crawl".
Suggest to put a comma after "grief" to separate the verb from the participial phrase.
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Ah, but God can use even our broken dreams and make them nourish new dreams which He will give us to honor Him at the right times.
I liked how you rhymed "fall" and "crawl".
Suggest to put a comma after "grief" to separate the verb from the participial phrase.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2024
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Iza. I hope you are well
Covered in grief crawl is brave for you to say. I guess the.grief is from the broken dreams. The crawl?? I start to see little sad dreams crawling around.
Excellent. You always want your readers to be thinking about what makes sense. Then you are successful in your poem
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi, Iza. I hope you are well
Covered in grief crawl is brave for you to say. I guess the.grief is from the broken dreams. The crawl?? I start to see little sad dreams crawling around.
Excellent. You always want your readers to be thinking about what makes sense. Then you are successful in your poem
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2024
Comment from Pearl Edwards
The title, Decadence hints that there is much more to this grief crawl, the reason behind the fall of dreams has my imagination going full steam ahead. I like that your words inspired my imagination, Iza. Enjoyed,
cheers
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The title, Decadence hints that there is much more to this grief crawl, the reason behind the fall of dreams has my imagination going full steam ahead. I like that your words inspired my imagination, Iza. Enjoyed,
cheers
Comment Written 18-Jun-2024
