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Seasons In Time

Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "The Death of Spring "
Poems about the different seasons.

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Comment from jessizero
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I liked this "silly little idea" of a story told in poem form. Your rhymes were fun, as were the questionings and accusations. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
    Thank you. I truly appreciate your reading and then commenting on it.
Comment from Mintybee
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I liked this fun play on a murder investigation. I suppose seasons die out before a new one comes in, but that's an offbeat way to approach them. The imagery worked well. They rhyme worked well. I enjoyed this.
Mintybee

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
    Yeah, I'm not really sure that seasons die, but they do end for a time. I know it was kind of quirky, but it came to me so I thought I'd go ahead and write it out. I appreciate your having read and reviewed it.