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Comment from Janet Foor
We are definitely a work in progress and your marvelous poem is excellent reminder that we are children of God and He isn't finished with us yet.
I enjoyed the artwork and presentation and delightful imagery as well.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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We are definitely a work in progress and your marvelous poem is excellent reminder that we are children of God and He isn't finished with us yet.
I enjoyed the artwork and presentation and delightful imagery as well.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 8
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I have always said that you create the most gorgeous images and the words that go with them are spectacular. It takes much thought when you create such a scene.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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I have always said that you create the most gorgeous images and the words that go with them are spectacular. It takes much thought when you create such a scene.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi MariVal,
These quatrains remind us what a gift the beauty of nature is. And also that our very lives are a gift from God, too,
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Joan
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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Hi MariVal,
These quatrains remind us what a gift the beauty of nature is. And also that our very lives are a gift from God, too,
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Joan
Comment Written 18-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful evening.
Gypsy
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You're very welcome, MariVal.
Joan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I saw a T-shirt once that said, 'Be patient God isn't finished with me yet.' That fits your beautifully written poem and presentation perfectly. Yes, we are all a work in progress. I enjoyed reading and enjoyed the message.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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I saw a T-shirt once that said, 'Be patient God isn't finished with me yet.' That fits your beautifully written poem and presentation perfectly. Yes, we are all a work in progress. I enjoyed reading and enjoyed the message.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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Thank you, I appreciate your generosity and kindness. Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
i like the image of the sun being tangerine and lemon flame diving into the ocean waves dancing like nobody's watching...
nice smooth and peaceful flow using colours of hope and faith for the next day
nice one! thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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i like the image of the sun being tangerine and lemon flame diving into the ocean waves dancing like nobody's watching...
nice smooth and peaceful flow using colours of hope and faith for the next day
nice one! thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 18-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Oh wow, Gypsy! This is superb. I love your longer verses and the way you prolong the mood with glorious, inspiring imagery. And what a stanza to end on! Good old Maya! Didn't she always simply hit the nail on the head! Thanks for sharing this delightful read! Debbie
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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Oh wow, Gypsy! This is superb. I love your longer verses and the way you prolong the mood with glorious, inspiring imagery. And what a stanza to end on! Good old Maya! Didn't she always simply hit the nail on the head! Thanks for sharing this delightful read! Debbie
Comment Written 18-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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I love maya's poems and interviews... she was a phenomenal woman and poet. I love that poem.
Thank you very much for your exceptional review and kind words. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review.
Gypsy
Comment from Erika Whittle
What stellar presentation. And an equally beautiful poem. I especially like the last stanza and appreciate you referencing God as a divine artist. We always say creator but He's more than that.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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What stellar presentation. And an equally beautiful poem. I especially like the last stanza and appreciate you referencing God as a divine artist. We always say creator but He's more than that.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from juliaSjames
A beautiful write, MariVal. Every word strikes me as heartfelt, a song of praise to God. It reads as a modern-day psalm. Yes, we are the beloved children of God. I love the ritual of my church where the priest says after Holy Communion, "Beloved, depart in peace". We are challenged to love ourselves and others as God loves us. This is my work in progress.
How wonderful that you dedicate this write to Helen! She is a shining light.
Blessings, Cheryl
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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A beautiful write, MariVal. Every word strikes me as heartfelt, a song of praise to God. It reads as a modern-day psalm. Yes, we are the beloved children of God. I love the ritual of my church where the priest says after Holy Communion, "Beloved, depart in peace". We are challenged to love ourselves and others as God loves us. This is my work in progress.
How wonderful that you dedicate this write to Helen! She is a shining light.
Blessings, Cheryl
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Hello, Cheryl, I like, "Beloved, depart in peace". How beautiful.
It does come from my heart. I'm not a Bible expert but I feel close to Jesus Christ.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Hugs
MariVal
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a beautiful free verse and pictures to praise God's divine power. Yes. I'm amazed and grateful all the time but you've expressed your feeling in beautiful and precise words. You did a great presentation again.
Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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What a beautiful free verse and pictures to praise God's divine power. Yes. I'm amazed and grateful all the time but you've expressed your feeling in beautiful and precise words. You did a great presentation again.
Well done.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Amen! Thank you for this beautiful poem and the reminder of how we are all children of our Heavenly Father! In Ephesians 2:10, it says: "For we are God's masterpiece. He has created us anew in Christ Jesus, so we can do the good things he planned for us long ago." (New Living Translation)
Your poem captures this very thought - works in progress but He views each of us as His masterpiece. (The Greek word is "poiema")
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Amen! Thank you for this beautiful poem and the reminder of how we are all children of our Heavenly Father! In Ephesians 2:10, it says: "For we are God's masterpiece. He has created us anew in Christ Jesus, so we can do the good things he planned for us long ago." (New Living Translation)
Your poem captures this very thought - works in progress but He views each of us as His masterpiece. (The Greek word is "poiema")
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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I love Ephesians 2:10, I'm saving it to a file with your prayers.
Thank you very much, big sister. I appreciate the exceptional six stars review and wise feedback. I'm not a Bible expert, what I write comes straight from my heart.
Love you,
Marival
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God writes on our hearts, too. 💖😊💞