Grandma Working in Her Garden
A 5-line poem5 total reviews
Comment from zanya
The reader can almost share the peace and tranquillity of the environs and the garden and feel the sense of being among a 'plethora of gay blooms;- akin to meditation.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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The reader can almost share the peace and tranquillity of the environs and the garden and feel the sense of being among a 'plethora of gay blooms;- akin to meditation.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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I am delighted you could share the peace and tranquility of Grandma?s garden, zanya. Thank you for reviewing. Rod
Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan
You conjure up such a gentle, serene scene here, Rod.
I think, when we get to certain age, we take the greatest of pleasure from the simplest pastimes, and that's just how it should be. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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You conjure up such a gentle, serene scene here, Rod.
I think, when we get to certain age, we take the greatest of pleasure from the simplest pastimes, and that's just how it should be. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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I am so pleased I could conjure a "gentle, serene" scene for you in this short poem, Shirley. Thank you for your kind praise.
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You're so welcome.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very lovely and well written 5 line poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery. It made me think of when I was young and my grandfather was always working in his garden and my grandmother was always canning. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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This is a very lovely and well written 5 line poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery. It made me think of when I was young and my grandfather was always working in his garden and my grandmother was always canning. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 18-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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I am so pleased my short poem brought back fond memories of your grandparents, Teri. Many thanks for your kind praise.
Comment from jessizero
I think this is a great poem for the prompt. You got the syllable count right, and your picture helped bring the poem to life. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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I think this is a great poem for the prompt. You got the syllable count right, and your picture helped bring the poem to life. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much, jessi, for the high praise of my poem.
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Author,
Your poem abides by the contest's rules.
Your words are sweet, and the photo complements them nicely.
This is an excellent contest entry.
Good luck.
Cindy
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Author,
Your poem abides by the contest's rules.
Your words are sweet, and the photo complements them nicely.
This is an excellent contest entry.
Good luck.
Cindy
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Cindy.