Sunflower's Golden Smile
blessed by sunlight's gentle kiss5 total reviews
Comment from ESOSTINE
A lovely 5 line poetry entry with complementing photo that shows a golden petal that smiles upon a kiss from the sunlight. Well composed, and well enjoyed. Thanks for sharing your imagination. Good luck in the contest.
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A lovely 5 line poetry entry with complementing photo that shows a golden petal that smiles upon a kiss from the sunlight. Well composed, and well enjoyed. Thanks for sharing your imagination. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2024
Comment from Mintybee
This poem has good sensory details and strong words. It gives a clear picture, and a strong sense of emotion. It's bright and happy and I like it.
Mintybee
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This poem has good sensory details and strong words. It gives a clear picture, and a strong sense of emotion. It's bright and happy and I like it.
Mintybee
Comment Written 18-Jun-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This five-line poem, Sunflower's Golden Smile, has the proper formatting and finds the friendly-looking flora standing tall and issuing an invitation to us.
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This five-line poem, Sunflower's Golden Smile, has the proper formatting and finds the friendly-looking flora standing tall and issuing an invitation to us.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2024
Comment from jessizero
I think this was a great poem for the contest. You got the syllable counts right, and I liked your personification. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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I think this was a great poem for the contest. You got the syllable counts right, and I liked your personification. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
Comment from papa55mike
There's nothing like coming upon a field of sunflowers that fill the horizon and a flock of Goldfinches descending. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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There's nothing like coming upon a field of sunflowers that fill the horizon and a flock of Goldfinches descending. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024