The Big Guy Got Stung
He had a reason to remember the bees..2 total reviews
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
This poem cracks me up! Haha! I love the part when you say he has ever-flowing snot! The whole poem is full of a lot of fun nonsense which is perfect for the contest! Good luck!
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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This poem cracks me up! Haha! I love the part when you say he has ever-flowing snot! The whole poem is full of a lot of fun nonsense which is perfect for the contest! Good luck!
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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So pleased you enjoy this nonsense. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from JanPerry
Ouch. I can hear them buzzing overhead. I can feel them stinging my arse. I've had a very sore sting, when I trod on one. I was 11 back then.
It's simplicity makes it perfect for children story telling. Good fun!
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Ouch. I can hear them buzzing overhead. I can feel them stinging my arse. I've had a very sore sting, when I trod on one. I was 11 back then.
It's simplicity makes it perfect for children story telling. Good fun!
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review. Yes, for sure, bee stings anywhere on one's body are not fun.
