Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Yes, going to the beach is fun.

Forced whiteness, cascading.
Along the satine surfaces (I've been trying to decide exactly what the meaning of 'satine' is.)

Wind driven as rotation.
(Gravity affectd) (affected)

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024

Thanks Barbara and cleaned this up a bit.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from dovemarie

Excellent

HI Ricky, lovely poem for your book, it makes me feel the movement of the waves. I always enjoy seeing the waves come in and go out, it's a perfect picture, though I don't swim, I enjoy going into the shallow part of the ocean and feeling the swirling motionaround me. Dove

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024

But thank you for enjoying it.It's always fun to be swimming in the Oceans
Doctor Ricky

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

It sounds like you have been taking in the sun and it has soothed your soul and brought you some peace Ricky, I enjoyed your few words here, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024

Thanks Dolly been a little busy since my marriage to Dawna.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Yes, Australia has a culture of sun bronzed Bodies, sand surf and waves, we punch well above our meagre population in water sports, thanks for this post, this is beautifully written Ricky,

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024

Thanks, Roy.Always a pleasure to see you review and have a great and following evening.
Doctor Ricky

reply by royowen on 19-Jun-2024

You too