Reunion in the Stars
When rules are broken...3 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Whoa. Bleak and dark and SOO very well done, Mystery Writer. I like the way you kept me wondering a bit as I tried to conjure up a "bulging mask" in my mind. Great job with that facet of the suspense. And then the science lesson on the dangers of a clear-looking day? Just right!
This was just so well done in every aspect; it truly was. It was well-thought out and then well-executed. It is sure to do well in the polls. Good luck to you. xo
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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Whoa. Bleak and dark and SOO very well done, Mystery Writer. I like the way you kept me wondering a bit as I tried to conjure up a "bulging mask" in my mind. Great job with that facet of the suspense. And then the science lesson on the dangers of a clear-looking day? Just right!
This was just so well done in every aspect; it truly was. It was well-thought out and then well-executed. It is sure to do well in the polls. Good luck to you. xo
Comment Written 18-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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Thank you so very much for your kind and thoughtful review! Your words are greatly appreciated! Have a lovely day!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
The story skillfully captures the tension between Rex's need for independence and the stark reality of his world's dangers. This story is a compelling blend of environmental dystopia and personal tragedy, leaving a lasting impression of the delicate balance between freedom and safety in a perilous world.
Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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The story skillfully captures the tension between Rex's need for independence and the stark reality of his world's dangers. This story is a compelling blend of environmental dystopia and personal tragedy, leaving a lasting impression of the delicate balance between freedom and safety in a perilous world.
Well done.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful review!
Comment from Esther Brown
Excellent story! Yikes, even thinking of a life where we had to wear masks all the time is frightening. I had one small hesitation when you used the words "battered lamps" being her only company. In a darkened school hallway? Esther
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Excellent story! Yikes, even thinking of a life where we had to wear masks all the time is frightening. I had one small hesitation when you used the words "battered lamps" being her only company. In a darkened school hallway? Esther
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for reviewing and noticing my little error. I shall go in and fix that.
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Please fan me, I want to find your writing again. Esther