The Party
Riley never should have attended Lizzie's party that night3 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Wowza!!! This was horrifically chilling and tremendous in every way! Your descriptions of your costume and why you didn't have the mask, how your rage became so intense so quickly, why slamming Scott with the entire punch bowl really was NOT hard to believe in even the tiniest way, and how the catalyst for it all absolutely got what she had coming. (Too bad there wasn't an extra crystal cup or two for Lizzie as long as you were at it...)
And then there was that unnerving ending as I got to imagine the impending sequel after all that forced confinement to perfect the deed.
Yep, I'd say you absolutely nailed this. I repeat: WOWZA, Mystery Writer. You knocked this one out of the park!!! Good luck in the contest. xo
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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Wowza!!! This was horrifically chilling and tremendous in every way! Your descriptions of your costume and why you didn't have the mask, how your rage became so intense so quickly, why slamming Scott with the entire punch bowl really was NOT hard to believe in even the tiniest way, and how the catalyst for it all absolutely got what she had coming. (Too bad there wasn't an extra crystal cup or two for Lizzie as long as you were at it...)
And then there was that unnerving ending as I got to imagine the impending sequel after all that forced confinement to perfect the deed.
Yep, I'd say you absolutely nailed this. I repeat: WOWZA, Mystery Writer. You knocked this one out of the park!!! Good luck in the contest. xo
Comment Written 18-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your very kind comments. I am truly happy that you enjoyed my story.
Comment from Dr. Nad
Wow, this was a well written story with lamentable circumstances and lethal consequences. This is a cautionary tale was some built in corrections that were not followed. It seems like in the end, the writer has learned her lesson and she will follow her own advice and wear the mask. L O L Nice job.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Wow, this was a well written story with lamentable circumstances and lethal consequences. This is a cautionary tale was some built in corrections that were not followed. It seems like in the end, the writer has learned her lesson and she will follow her own advice and wear the mask. L O L Nice job.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for the nice review.
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You are most welcome my friend.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Happily parting with a 6 for this one. Fantastic story to come up with from a one line prompt. I was immersed in it from the very beginning. The dark nature of it was my cup of tea. The tie-in at the end with the mask is perfect. Wonderful job.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Happily parting with a 6 for this one. Fantastic story to come up with from a one line prompt. I was immersed in it from the very beginning. The dark nature of it was my cup of tea. The tie-in at the end with the mask is perfect. Wonderful job.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for reviewing and for the beautiful rating. I truly appreciate it and I am thrilled that you enjoyed the story.