Peacock Blue
Minute poem20 total reviews
Comment from Debbie Pope
I'm not sure where this one came from, but I love it. It's so original. Striking in it's images. To me, it's all about that "peacock blue." It's about vanity, which you present as bold and appealing. I am definitely not trendy, or avant-garde, but I am moved by colors and beauty. This unusual minute poem is full of both.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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I'm not sure where this one came from, but I love it. It's so original. Striking in it's images. To me, it's all about that "peacock blue." It's about vanity, which you present as bold and appealing. I am definitely not trendy, or avant-garde, but I am moved by colors and beauty. This unusual minute poem is full of both.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Hello Debbie.... please forgive this tardy thank you and know that I sincerely appreciate you and your lovely comments! I enjoy writing the minute form and use it a lot to get my thoughts in line on meter and end rhymes. Thanks again!!
Melissa
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I love blue, cobalt is my favorite. Peacocks are so beautiful..... great imagery. I like the picture. I love the boho style....... clothes and jewelry.... it's a little bit of hippie look... Gypsy style, my favorite.
Well done
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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I love blue, cobalt is my favorite. Peacocks are so beautiful..... great imagery. I like the picture. I love the boho style....... clothes and jewelry.... it's a little bit of hippie look... Gypsy style, my favorite.
Well done
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Hello Gypsy.... please forgive this tardy thank you and know that I sincerely appreciate you and your lovely comments! I enjoy writing the minute form and use it a lot to get my thoughts in line on meter and end rhymes. Thanks again!!
Melissa
Comment from Paul McFarland
This one is different, Melissa. Your rhyme scheme is very interesting. That is a very unique picture that you have chosen. Is this poem autobiographical?
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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This one is different, Melissa. Your rhyme scheme is very interesting. That is a very unique picture that you have chosen. Is this poem autobiographical?
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Hello Paul.... please forgive this tardy thank you and know that I sincerely appreciate you and your lovely comments! I enjoy writing the minute form and use it a lot to get my thoughts in line on meter and end rhymes. Thanks again!!
Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed this trendy minute poem full of vibrant modern scenes of bold colour of peacock blue, a magical and appealing poem Melissa, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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I enjoyed this trendy minute poem full of vibrant modern scenes of bold colour of peacock blue, a magical and appealing poem Melissa, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Hello Dolly.... please forgive this tardy thank you and know that I sincerely appreciate you and your lovely comments! I enjoy writing the minute form and use it a lot to get my thoughts in line on meter and end rhymes. Thanks again!!
Melissa
Comment from Sally Law
Melissa dear,
This is fabulous in the minute form, my friend. Your dazzling poem caught my eye and I had to give you a six. Beautifully written and presented to impress.
Sending along my very best to you today as always.
Sal Xoxo
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Melissa dear,
This is fabulous in the minute form, my friend. Your dazzling poem caught my eye and I had to give you a six. Beautifully written and presented to impress.
Sending along my very best to you today as always.
Sal Xoxo
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Hello Sally.... please forgive this tardy thank you and know that I sincerely appreciate you and your lovely comments! I enjoy writing the minute form and use it a lot to get my thoughts in line on meter and end rhymes. Thanks again!!
Melissa
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My pleasure. Never a worry with me, my friend. I know you'll come. Blessings,
Sal Xoxo
Comment from tempeste
Ciao Sugarray and ben tornata!
I never agreed with the saying that blue and green should never be seen together.
Peacock feathers confirm my point.
Their blue/ green shimmering hued feathers are just stunning!
Love the artwork you chose to showcase your delightful poem.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Ciao Sugarray and ben tornata!
I never agreed with the saying that blue and green should never be seen together.
Peacock feathers confirm my point.
Their blue/ green shimmering hued feathers are just stunning!
Love the artwork you chose to showcase your delightful poem.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much Franca. I am so very pleased that you like this colorful tribute to peacocks and the people who embrace colorful lives. Hugs, my friend.
Melissa
Comment from June Sargent
Minute poems are not that easy to compose. And you've done a great job with this one! I love the rad appeal of this avante gard Boho peacock! She is groovy! Lol
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Minute poems are not that easy to compose. And you've done a great job with this one! I love the rad appeal of this avante gard Boho peacock! She is groovy! Lol
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Haha, thanks so much, June. It was fun to be a little edgy in a colorful way. So glad you liked it and the crazy theme. Hugs!!
Melissa
Comment from Erika Whittle
Firstly, that picture is amazing! Avant-garde indeed. I like this poem. It reminds me of a youth leader I had as a teenager. She was always well dressed, always spunky. And she was hilariously blunt. I always thought she was cool, and respected her style and confidence.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Firstly, that picture is amazing! Avant-garde indeed. I like this poem. It reminds me of a youth leader I had as a teenager. She was always well dressed, always spunky. And she was hilariously blunt. I always thought she was cool, and respected her style and confidence.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Hi Erika. Thank you. It was fun to reach out into the wonderful world of art and color. Much appreciated.
Melissa
Comment from royowen
Hi Melissa, it's so good to see you again. And writing the perfect minute poem as always. Full of great language, and as always, a pristine poem to please the connoisseur of fine poetry, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Hi Melissa, it's so good to see you again. And writing the perfect minute poem as always. Full of great language, and as always, a pristine poem to please the connoisseur of fine poetry, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much, Roy. I enjoy writing the Minute form :)
Hugs.
Melissa
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Well donr
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
You've got great presentation here for a light and frothy minute poem. I enjoyed reading it very much, especially the first stanza. Thanks for sharing, kay
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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You've got great presentation here for a light and frothy minute poem. I enjoyed reading it very much, especially the first stanza. Thanks for sharing, kay
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Hi Kay. It is good to hear from you. Thanks for your lovely review!!
Melissa
